Sunset’s ultimatum melted. She said she’ll come back in three days, but they felt just like one. I hadn’t told the princess that Sunset was about to meet me again. Why? I don’t know. I know, I should have, but… my human part was strong, and she saw no threat in Sunset but an opportunity.
Well, it's getting better and better with every chapter! Too bad, that this one was so short...
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Bon-bon is dead, Sunset fled, Celestia is giving a speech about how vengance is bad...
I wish, that Lyra will get her revenge. Without all that "do you really want to be like her?" stuff. I want Sunset laying in the pool of blood, with her head chopped off.
Great story so far, keep it up!
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Thanks for giving me your opinion, I'm glad you like it!
In fact, I'm not a friend of this 'I'm better than you' bullshit, so I'm pretty sure Lyra's got a good chance to get what she wants ;D
Actually I wanted to finish the next part completely before I load anything up, so I can jump back and change something without forcing the reader to re-read previous chapters, but I think I'll post some pieces in my blog every now and then, so stay tuned!
I rather liked this fic. Keep up the good work!
some of the words r missing dude makeing me have to highlight them to read
i feel ya sis i feel ya