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Lux


I am a writer, artist, role player, and fan of MLP!

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Princess Celestia pays a visit to Sugarcube Corner in Ponyville. After an emergency bakery run by Pinkie Pie, she is left alone in the store. Can the Princess have the willpower to resist her craving of cakes? Probably not.

(This is a one chapter fun little fanfic. Enjoy!)

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Comments ( 9 )

Well, that cake certainly wasn't a lie!!

Very good, but you should set apart Pinkie's note with italics or as a quote.

Well, at least Twilight recognized it was icing, and not some other sort of material.

Well technically the title is incorrect, because she left food behind, all over the walls and herself. Unless it was making a mess of the whole bakery. Like that Pinkie completely stopped in awe.

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Well that's an avatar image I won't get out of my head for a while. :pinkiecrazy:

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Well that's an avatar image I won't get out of my head for a while. :pinkiecrazy:

That's the point! :twilightsheepish:

Fun concept but parts, especially the setup, felt wooden and awkward. You've got potential though.

Talk about eye candy!

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