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Princess Luna is tormented and takes a trip to the Royal gardens to ease her pain, but it only worsens when her lover, Twilight Sparkle, catches her in a heinous act.

FLASHFICTION, not for the faint of feels.

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It's a good thing I hate Twilight anyway :trollestia:

Can't tell if dislike is because of bad story, or they didn't like what happened XD

I find it extremely disturbing, right now I'm crying :fluttercry:

idk what to say to this..it's just... wow

you get a like and fave from me

I`m speechless. Just amazing! Like and Fave.
They dislike it probably because they don`t like how it turned out.

3495847 That was my objective :trollestia: Jesus, I mean, I was really depressed when I wrote this XD

3496448 Thank you very much :twilightsmile:

3496744 Yeah, that probably is why XD I was thinking, all of my stories so far had a happy ending, why not write one with a not so happy ending?

My only complain is a messy and unpleasant suicide, I would have preferred that her head remained intact, just death of the brain from overcharge or something.

3497416 I wanted it to be as shocking as possible. How shocking would it be to see your sister you've known for a thousand+ years head blown to pieces by her own accord from nowhere?

Wow, I know how u feel Luna. You'll always be my favourite. Luna : Best Pony Princess Ever

I have never cried so hard

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FLASHFICTION, not for the faint of feels.

Can't say I didn't warn you.... :trollestia:

Wow... Now I have to follow you

3517161 Much appreciated :twilightsmile:

Man the feels. :raritydespair:

3525911 Indeed, many a feels were had

Wow:derpyderp1: That was amazing and really sad:fluttercry:. Good job:pinkiecrazy:

I'm crying, so this evoked some emotion from me, but this story is short, poorly written and I can't say that I liked it. I also can't say that I dislike this. You get a like, but you're losing a favorite.

3564229 I don't know whether to be offended, or take that as a compliment... Therefore, I shall ignore it.

3543748 Thank you very much :)

So 2 ponies died in the spam of 15 minutes (the it took for me too read the whole thing).....................BULLSHIT

Thumps up, and faved. Just.... wow... sob... Luna... sob. LUNA!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Luna... I can't let go of her...
I love you!
I... love you...

I just lost the point of living. Think Im gonna commit suicide...

3590413 I am ever so sorry for writing a fanfiction that does not pertain to your tastes. Therefore, http://www.funnyjunk.com/funny_pictures/1556268/DIO

3591761 I think that's a compliment, thank you :rainbowlaugh:

3592206 well I still liked it also it made my little bro cry so thanks.:pinkiehappy:

3592458 No problem :rainbowlaugh:

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yeah me too :trollestia: :pinkiehappy:

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.....this wasn't a feels trip for me since Luna was just being stupid....and then i never really had feels toward Twilight

sad story but it was good at same time

I have no love for Twilight but Luna is another story.

Ok well this was just sad, I was really hoping this was a nightmare since I DIDN'T SEE A DEATH TAG OR A SUICIDE/SELF HARM TAG!

I saw this story was created during 2013 but it should be updated adding the appropriate tags. I'm also questioning how this story has 5 blue tags, the maximum is 3, was 5 blue tags added to stories back than?

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Yeah I haven't written a story, aside from some mild updates, on here in a long time. Didn't know about the new tags, so thank you for letting me know. It should be properly updated now. And yeah, they use to let ya do 5 blue tags

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