HEADS UP! TRAGEDY. NO HAPPY. IF YOU COME FOR HAPPY, YOU WILL BE VERY UNHAPPY. SO DON'T DISLIKE A GOOD FICTION BECAUSE YOU DON'T LIKE ITS TONE.
Twilight Sparkle is dead. Now, she must witness her friends tear their lives apart and wither away, helpless to do anything as a ghost with Death as her only companion in the lonely afterlife.
Also, this will not be a story containing a happy go lucky ending. If you do not want to witness a tragic ending, do NOT read this cause you'll just dislike it because you don't enjoy the ending.
Chapters (3)
If it made you mad to write the rape scene, why do it? Couldn't you have killed her off in some other way like a disease, dood? What is up with these fics that need to try and make us go 'OH SHIT' when somepony we really like get's raped and killed, dood. I'm sure there are better ways to do this than that... but I mostly rant this because Twilight was RAPED by a douchebag, dood.
Why do I keep seeing fics with a neat premise only to find that the neat premise to driven by my favorite pony getting rape din the first chapter, dood?
3790575 It needed to be as violent as possible, as you will find out later in the fiction. If it makes you feel any better, Twilight is my second favorite pony
It just needs to be as graphic as possible for shock and awe factor.
3790575 If it makes you feel any better, I changed it up a little. Mostly due to the fact that I don't want people just skipping over this story because if it's like to dislike ratio. No violent rape scene.
3792709 Okay then, I can roll with this, dood. Still hate how other authors need to use rape as a cheap way to get the reader's riled up and insta-hate the attacker, dood.
3792758 In all honesty, I wasn't trying to do either of those. I was trying to make her death as violent as possible. It doesn't really matter if you hate him
3792758 I think almost any attacker would be "insta-hated", "dood"
3956790 Uhhh... Wut
3956815 What I meant to say is. I know I was reading when Twilight's friends were breaking apart so easily with Twilight gone. I was hoping seeing the Stallion that killed Twilight dead.
... Hmm, it's strange how I couldn't stop laughing. has the story become a comedy all of a sudden? or is it just the necromancer in me talking?
3957007 In due time, my friend
3957308 The necromancer. And Death, of course. I made him the morbid comic relief for a reason
3958718 Ok then.
Ok I'm going to tear that pony apart
4140461 One of her best friends was murdered and she took it the worst way possible. All of them did, and that's what this story was based on. The different ponies reactions and fates to what happens when shit hits the fan and they take it in the worst way possible
nooo she died that stinks and i can only guess that it gets worse as time goes on but will the fire be explained? who threw the molotovs
4140603 Remember how she said Golden Touch had a criminal background? Well, she just pissed Golden Touch off. The molotov's were her doing.
4140572 Oh. Anything else?
4179124 Nothing that I can think of
4179279 Ok
I'm seriously seething with anger right now I want to rip applejack apart and force feed her to death (the pony) and rip him apart and send it to space where I hope will burn before it leaves the atmosphere
God, I'm crying so hard right now.
4753073 Twas the intended purpose