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MerlosTheMad


Greetings, I am Merlos the Mad. I am a dabbler of both words and wizardry in my free time. I also invite you all to partake in my musings. Take care though, as they are the product of a madman.

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In commemoration of four seasons of Pone
The Mane Six Meet Their Fans!

Twilight and her friends, Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy and Pinkie, are all out enjoying a picnic. That is, until a big black portal swallows them up and spits them out Celestia knows where!

Wherever the portal is taking them to now looks a little bit like... a little blue marble?

Things just go from bad to worse, even after their hooves are back on the ground. The girls all can't help but wonder, just what is going on here? Stranger still, Twilight really thinks she recognizes that announcer's voice, but she can't quite place it.


Authors Note

Just a couple chapters of nonsense for a silly joke premise. I like the idea of ponies actually encountering us, and I love self deprecating humor, as well. This is a very lighthearted tale intended purely as a short read pick me up and to get you, the readers, giggling like madmen (and women). Please enjoy, everypony!


Special Thanks
I got a lot of help from all of my friends once again on this story. Thank you all fellows, you're something else. Thank you especially Ludicrous Lycan for drafting framework! Lastly, thank you everypony for sticking around for so long in the fandom. This story and many others like it and better wouldn't exist without you!

The artwork is by Guardian-Core

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 112 )

3528431

I cannot deny my Wizardly delight to post pony stories. :twilightsmile:

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Rape

Wait no!

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I can't comprehend this... my brain hurts >-< I should read it but I'm afraid to... I can imagine this actually happening. Some people would probably fall on their knees and start bowing at them...

3528541

It's all in good fun, sire, haha. Just expect silly comedic antics nothing bad at all.

3528543
That's good, but I'm still afraid, the idea is so perfect that this deserves thumbs up x100 right now!

... Really? You had to use the stereotype of Fluttershy having big hooters? I... shuld have seen that coming, I suppose. Dashie being the shortest took me by surprise a little, admittedly, so thanks for that.

... lol, they're naked. :trollestia:

Wow that was a strange story! More please! :pinkiehappy:

Say, where's the source for that image?

So, you are trying to out trollfic me...

Eh, you win... *soooo lazy* :rainbowlaugh:

I bet the brony crowd would not be as excited as before because that the Mane 6 gets replaced by Humans lol.

But they nevertheless would still cheer, but not as loudly though.

3528855

I searched for it and could not find them again, Ether.

How goes Pirene, by the way?

3528934
Quite well, been working on Chapter 13. You can come pre-read if you like, you still have the Table of Contents link. :pinkiehappy:

Oh, awesome! I was looking forward to reading the finished version of this. I'll let you know what I think... er... once I get done watching the Season 4 premier.

Sorry, that comes first! :twilightsmile:

My god imagine if all of the fan favorites appeared. :pinkiegasp:

Comment posted by Zennistrad deleted Nov 24th, 2013

...Were the Mane 6 naked when they turned into humans?

You know what would be really funny? I know you have Gandalf playing with ponies as your profile pic, but maybe you could have a Starswirl the Bearded playing with barbies. It would sorta be an inversion and quite hilarious IMO. :pinkiehappy:

And then unexpected naughty things happened! (One can hope.)

This looks like lots of fun. Faved!

3528934
TinEye couldn't find it either, maybe if you had a copy without the text?

3528541 Especially if they've read my fic HUMAN By: Twilight Sparkle; the mane six are the goddesses of humanity. :pinkiecrazy:

“Dashie, you’re so teeny and short! Hah!” She scrubbed a handy through her hair like she were a foal.

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Whenever any pony is turned into a human my initial thought is "please let them be clothed". I blame society's nudity taboos. However, depending on contexts my expectations can change. Now my hopes have changed to that the crowd might have something else to cheer for.

Great story! Looking forward to the next chapter :twilightsmile:

And I found the source for your cover picture :ajsmug:

You started yet another fic?

You are mad! :twilightoops:

3531168

It's already finished. Relax. :twilightsheepish:

I've learned my lesson about long stories at the very least... Doubt I'll ever stop writing though. :ajsmug:

Did they just run onto the stage of Bronycon buck nekkid?

3531550

mmhmm. The story was pulled by some of the staff. I'm working to get it resolved.

Question: Will this story become dirty? I hope this story does not become dirty.

3537549

No, not in the least. It would have an E rating were it not for the alluded to nudity, but it's hard to avoid, and I'm certain most of you don't mind it. :twilightsheepish:

3537861

Ok, great! Thank you for clearing that up.

The average fan upon meeting the Mane 6: C-can I sire your foals?

The Mane 6's reactions...

Twilight: :twilightoops:
Rarity: :raritycry:
Pinkie: :pinkiesick:
Fluttershy: :fluttershbad:
Applejack: :applejackconfused:

And Rainbow Dash: :rainbowkiss::rainbowwild:

(Years later, Dash celebrates her 100th birthday with her 385,762 half-human mutant spawn....)

:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

>>>Twilight saw it over in the distance; a little, blue light in the blackness like a marble, or a spark perhaps. >>>

So they are in space. Wait, they can breathe in space?!

PONIES ARE RELATED TO LORD FRIEZA!!! :pinkiegasp:

You know that I’m perfectly proficient with all forms of magic. I’ve practiced this spell dozens of times on Spike!”

Why do I feel the need to quote George Takei here? :rainbowwild:

Pfff what. Nekkid girls ftw! Well, at least there won't be much doubt amongst their fans that they're the real deal :facehoof:

Corrections:
> “I don’t know what happened girls, but it wasn’t me that did it.”
"girls" is an addressing term here. Needs a comma both before and after it.
> “Everypony don’t move from this spot, it might be dangerous.
The way it's used, "Everypony" is an addressing term here, so, comma behind it. If it's not meant as an addressing, it should be "Nopony move from this spot."
> Rarity brought the still muttering Fluttershy in a consoling embrace
should be "still-muttering"
> Aw, come on Fluttershy, this is nothing!
"Fluttershy" is addressing term; comma before and after. (Also, "come on Fluttershy" is potentially really really dirty :rainbowderp:)
> Oh, come on out girls!
Comma before "girls".
> Please, stay calm our guests!
Odd sentence. Feels like something's missing there. You generally don't address people as "our guests".
> “Oooh, you all look so rediculous,”
"ridiculous"

3539555

So they are in space. Wait, they can breathe in space?!

PONIES ARE RELATED TO LORD FRIEZA BATMAN!!! :pinkiegasp:

Fix'd :moustache:

I propose that De Lancie is really Discord's human form and that he's the reason there's a show about Equestria. The show exists purely because he snapped his fingers and gave Lauren Faust ideas. That's why his voice matches the voice they know as the voice of the Spirit of Chaos. Also... Oh my... 6 girls with no clothes at BronyCon and who are really the Mane Six in magical disguises... This can only end well.
I'm so glad Pinkie decided to refer to certain female anatomy as "party balloons". It's much less blunt.
Minor correction:

bounded towards the other no-longer-a-pony.

shouldn't it be no-longer-a-pony-in-appearance? Since apparently Dash can still fly...
One question: why is the story marked as On Hiatus already?

3550220

They were some issues with the story staying up. It was pulled for various this and that reasons. I wouldn't mind sharing it through a private message with you, as such information does seem to warrant being private.

3539296
How would that work? Magic? Good luck getting Twi to cast a spell like that.
3529136
Me neither. Merlos lies! Or maybe we just missed them...

3550240

I do not! I swear you guys must have just missed them. :unsuresweetie: To be fair though, we have to use our imaginations now about this story taking place at Bronycon.

3550248 heheh I know. I love your stories so far. I've read this and Thunder Struck. Both are, as of me clicking (or, as is the case since I'm on my Android, tapping) the star on the story header, on my favorites. Write on, good madman, write on.

3550232 I would very much like to read the rest of this. Please do that.

3550240 Molestia cast the spell.

She had 140,738,378,372 mutant pony descendents. :pinkiecrazy::trollestia:

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