You seem to have javascript disabled, or your browser is failing to execute it properly. Much of Fimfiction's functionality requires javascript so we suggest you turn it on! If this message goes away after a few seconds, ignore it, javascript support sometimes takes a few seconds to detect.

Featured In13

More Stories14

  • T Succession

    When she was birthed with horn and wings she was thought to be a pegacorn, a rare and blessed blending of the tribes, whose long life and power brought wealth and stature. Then the guards came, seeking the first alicorn born in over a thousand years.
    14,985 words · 4,523 views  ·  641  ·  15
  • T The Xenophile's Guide to Equestria

    A chronicle of Twilight Sparkle's life with the human Lero and his herd. Based on Xenophilia.
    40,529 words · 11,755 views  ·  1,486  ·  59
  • E To Be A Mule

    Dilly Daliér is a mule with a dream that can never be.
    2,983 words · 1,479 views  ·  171  ·  4
  • T Guiding Light

    Calamity befalls the royalty of Equestria and, in lieu of plans that took decades to create and moments to ruin, control of the cosmos is bequeathed to the only pony Celestia had time to empower.
    37,532 words · 3,979 views  ·  317  ·  11
  • T Where I Burn...

    Roslindis is a griffon who doesn't like to fly. She's quite happy with this fact. Her mother? Not so much.
    1,773 words · 518 views  ·  87  ·  1
  • T Morning Glory

    For her entire life, Twilight has believed that the ponies of Equestria live together in harmony. When she wakes in a strange town, in a body no longer her own, she must face the possibility that Equestria's harmony may be less than she believed
    8,672 words · 473 views  ·  56  ·  0
  • T And The Stars Shine Forth

    Before her fall, Luna lived entire lifetimes as a mortal pony. She now wishes to do so again, and elects to spend some time with Twilight Sparkle and her friends. She never expected to fall madly in love.
    74,348 words · 3,965 views  ·  442  ·  20
  • T Falling to the Centre

    He had shown her what it meant to fall, taught her to follow her heart no matter where it might lead. She loved him for it. A Xenophilia side fic.
    5,607 words · 2,765 views  ·  299  ·  12

Blog Posts374

  • Thursday
    Elite: Dangerous beta 3.9 quick test stream thing

    Frontier Developments just dropped beta 3.9 of Elite so I'm dropping all my everything to check it out. Anyone wants to take a look, I'll be pootling around in space for a little while here.

    And all done! Note to self, ramming the big ships in space is a bad idea.

    5 comments · 57 views
  • Thursday
    Opinionated values

    A while back I did a happy drunk blog. Today is the angry drunk blog. I'm down about half a bottle of very expensive whisky (because reasons) and it's only the extensive practice of a dyslexic that allows me to type coherently now that all the letters are dancing a jig across my keyboard - which I'm not looking at anyway because I can touch type because I'm not some plebian hunt'n'pecker peckerhead dweeb who has no idea where their fingers are.

    There comes a point when you find yourself having conversations with people who you quickly realise were not even born when you were experiencing the formative years of your life. There are people on this very site - people with responsibilities, with power and with the trust of potentially thousands of users in their judgement - who were not yet born when Lisa Simpson played Classical Gas for the very first (and last) time. People for whom the the TNG episode All Good Things was a historical footnote on events that happened before they could suck their own big toe. People who did not see the Berlin Wall fall, nor the end of the Thatcher premiership, the Challenger disaster or the entire Gulf War, who nevertheless are old enough to have credit cars, drive cars, own property and be nearly past the maximum age limit to join the armed forces. People who should be children, but are somehow adults.

    I was writing fiction before many of you were born. This is not a condemnation of your abilities or an attempt to pump up my own; it is a simple statement of fact. Many of you were not even sloppy seconds when I was starting my university career. When I was writing my first (abandoned) novel, more then a few of you were still trying to understand that there were other food sources than the giant round squishy milk dispenser.

    I have no idea right now if I'm depressed, angry, bitter or enlightened by this.

    My reaction is the same as always: Get drunk, listen to classical rock and cry.

    It's probably beautiful.

    14 comments · 128 views
  • 1w, 19h
    Old bike

    2 comments · 53 views
  • 1w, 1d
    Tate of the Pony Words IX: Cats are Stinkers

    There are a few constants in the world worth remember. Prices will rise, politicians will philander, and you too will be faced with unexpected bills just when you run out of money.

    My cat has managed to develop a pretty profound flea allergy (also she brought in fleas and oh my god they are hideous little monsters) and is currently looking more than a bit scraggly. I'm taking her to the vet tomorrow and will probably be faced with a pretty chunky bill for whatever treatments they prescribe to her. Creams and ointments and pills and whatnots... I have no idea how much it'll be. Aaaand I have no money. Yay. And there seems to be a brewing familial conflict over who gets certain bits of the contents of my deceased aunt's home. It's grandma's silverware all over again...

    All this is the latest in a long line of mostly small and occasionally huge crappy things that have happened over the last month or two... or year... so you can probably imagine that my motivation for writing is not exactly at peak condition right now.

    Still! I am at least doing something. Current projects actually making headway are Morning Glory, of which I've got about 4k of the next chapter down, and No Room For Regret, which has come up to a whopping 10k for the next chapter and will probably top out at about 16000 words.

    Everything else is stuck. Picking a random example, on To See The Light I wrote a whole six words in the last two weeks.

    Depressing.

    4 comments · 52 views
  • 2w, 4d
    A first! Fanart!

    5 comments · 106 views
  • ...
 89
 1,507
Source

Sooner or later, everyone finds their way to Roseluck's flower stall. And then they leave.


Part of Twilight's Library

Now available as an audio book

And also in Russian apparently

First Published
13th Nov 2013
Last Modified
13th Nov 2013
#1 · 53w, 6d ago · 5 · ·

Waaaaaiiit...

No way.

It took me a minute or two of thinking, but I think I get what you just did with this.

I think.

I dunno. It's cool, but I think it must've gone over my head slightly.

#2 · 53w, 6d ago · 5 · ·

..............

Um.  Is this...?  Did you just make Roseluck into...?

...Wow.  Just...  Wow.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Spacecowboy
Story Approver
#3 · 53w, 6d ago · 8 · ·

Flabbergasted

#4 · 53w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

... ... Fancy... ... I like it.

#5 · 53w, 6d ago · 2 · ·

Wow, I can't believe you really took it and ran with it. It's beautiful.:twilightsmile:

#6 · 53w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

Wow....

#7 · 53w, 6d ago · 8 · ·

...so...

Roseluck is a phsychopomp? That's pretty dark, especially the way she handles it. Still, beautiful, in a way; one last stop at the florist's before you go.

~bass

#8 · 53w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

Huh...interesting.

If I'm interpreting it correctly, that is. I'm not sure. Stuff like this goes over my head a lot.

#9 · 53w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

Well. That was . . . unexpected. In a good sort of way.

#10 · 53w, 6d ago · 8 · ·

I did a bit of research the moment Roseluck said "One or two things, but they aren't important." And I found this.

Exquisitely done, with just enough information to help us figure it out... assuming that I figured it out correctly. A rather interesting role for a member of the Ponyville Panic Promulgators. Maybe she's just worried about the weekend rush...

In any case, thank you for this. :twilightsmile:

...damn emoticons, with their contextual irony.

#11 · 53w, 6d ago · 2 · ·

This was amazingly well done. You wrote with an intriguing style, delivered a satisfying story, and laid on the symbols beautifully.

Well done.

#12 · 53w, 6d ago · 2 · ·

>>3483718

without that link this story would have gone right over my head.

with it...:fluttercry:

#13 · 53w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

I want to say I know what this means but I'm not entirely sure. No one else is saying so I wont, but if it is what I think it is then damn this is good.

#14 · 53w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

BY THE POWER OF COMPUTER, I REVIVE THEE

#15 · 53w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

It took me a few reads but I think I figured out what's going on here. Great story, pretty sad when you think of it though.

#16 · 53w, 6d ago · 8 · ·

Very beautiful.  Quite sad once you recognize the symbolism, yet still beautiful.

I like to think at the ending that Celestia lowered the sun a bit early on that day.

#17 · 53w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

Whoa. I'm suddenly glad that my mother taught me what flowers mean, this is probably one of the best things I've read here on fimfiction, and I've read a lot fics.

#18 · 53w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

Beautiful story, don't usually read that many sad fics but this one was good.

#19 · 53w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

I had to read this story five time before I understood it as well as look up flower meanings.  I'm rather dense sometimes but...:raritycry: This story is beautiful and sad.  I think you owe me a new heart cause you just broke mine.

#20 · 53w, 5d ago · 1 · 16 ·

Her brow lowered and he looked around the square again.

TWILIGHT GREW A DICK?!  She is far to powerful to die now, gender changing powers ho!

Least it wasn't Luna, you would have died by lead pipe Arch.  Though, just wondering, what flower would you choose?  Not that I would kill you with a bat, that would just be silly.  

#21 · 53w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

...  I choose to disbelieve.  :fluttercry:

#22 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

I didn't get it, so I read the comments. That made things worse.

For those who like to work for their plot, I suppose it was a good story, but I've never been the type. Ah well, same reason I didn't like Flashes on the Horizon.

#23 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

I don't get it. Could someone explain?

#24 · 53w, 5d ago · 2 · ·

I was checking all the flower symbols against a webpage I found a while ago, but it was a comment saying she was a phsychopomp that make it all clear, especially after revisiting the description.

Wow man. All the subtleties everywhere. Very nice job with all the symbolism!

#25 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

Wow, beautifully done. Sweet and quite sad.

#26 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

Good, but I don't get it.

#27 · 53w, 5d ago · 4 · ·

>>3485468>>3485630

For any that don't understand, here's a hint. The flowers that Twilight picked, aside from the sunflower, are common funeral flowers. Now, reread the story and cry like men.

#28 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

OK, THAT TOOK A WHILE, BUT JESUS CHRIST DOES IT HIT YOU HARD

exquisite job good sir, very well done :twilightsmile:

#30 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

Wonderfully done.  Had to read it twice for the full impact, but I suspect that's all part of the story.  After the first reading, you know something's not quite right, and it's not until you read it again with the correct frame of mind that the story finishes.

#31 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

That was               interesting.

#33 · 53w, 5d ago · 3 · 1 ·

Jesus Christ, this was amazing. It took me a bit to get it, but wow . . .

That was a mental trip that left me feeling so satisfied as a reader, but emotionally scarred as well. The idea was subtle, too. You didn't try too hard to make it obvious, but with research, the symbolism can be found.

This is one of those literary masterpieces that exceed all of my expectations, and it is always an honour to be able to read something like this. Thank you, good sir, for writing this fantastic story. And a bright future lay ahead of you if you continue to do things like this.

#34 · 53w, 5d ago · 4 · ·

Also, Through the Valley of the Shadow of Death.

#35 · 53w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

I read, read the comments, read linked webpages, re-read, re-re-read, and I have one thing to say.

>>3486091

That must make me the most girly woman ever because I didn't even sniffle. Still well done though.

#36 · 53w, 5d ago · 3 · ·

Puts "say it with flowers" in a whole new context, and importantly, -doesn't- say just the right things to keep from distracting the reader. Two thumbs up.

#37 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

Having a pet reminds us of of these things.

Think about it.

#38 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

It took me a second reading to figure it out, but this is truly beautiful; an elegant masterpiece in style and execution of concept.

Have an upvote and a favourite. I eagerly await the featuring this story richly deserves.

#39 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

Got it in six paragraphs. It's not exactly subtle, especially when it says that her friends visiting would be undesirable.

>>3486385

Woah what the fuck

Are those spoilers

#40 · 53w, 5d ago · 2 · ·

...Oh my. :pinkiesad2:

A very nice bit of redirection. I was certain the whole thing was a unrequited love story right up to the end.

Excellent work.

#41 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

That took me a while to figure out. Very impressive

#43 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

And I'ma put this in the Leroverse (or at least give it some twidash background) in my head so the following linky makes more sense.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1dA6DGjNMTI

Go ahead, play the song and read the fic at the same time, I dares ya.

#44 · 53w, 5d ago · 2 · ·

>>3488002

No, Twilight did. That's why Celestia was crying.

#45 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3488084

Oh, that makes sense. So they come to her stand when they die? :fluttercry: THIS IS NOT SLICE OF LIFE! THIS IS TRAGEDY! YOU DON'T DIE EVERY DAY! :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

#46 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3485547 Glad to help :twilightsmile:

~bass

#47 · 53w, 5d ago · 3 · ·

>>3488092 It's a slice from the life of the psychopomp.

~bass

#48 · 53w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

>>3483566 Yours is the reaction I wanted.

>>3483582 Yep!

>>3483608>>3483619>>3483627 :pinkiehappy:

>>3483623 Considering the way it was spawned I think we should all be impressed at how well it's done. :twilightsmile: Thanks for letting me steal it anyway.

>>3483674 That sort of thing, yep! I'm pleasantly surprised at how many people got it, and also equally pleased at how many people didn't quite figure it out at first. Seems I struck some sort of balance there.

>>3488106 ... and I did wonder if that tag might be just a teensy bit ironic. :rainbowwild:

>>3483718 Oh yeah :twilightoops: Quick, find a substitute!  :trixieshiftright:

Oh never mind... :trixieshiftleft:

Yes the symbolism of the flowers is important. Everyone seems to have missed one in particular, though. I wonder if they'll figure it out. :raritywink:

>>3483677 Good!

>>3483751 Thanks!

>>3484556 Roses, to remind me that even thorns come with flowers. :twilightsmile:

Also because Roseluck has one on her butt. :heart:

>>3484930 Sorreh... :fluttercry:

>>3485547>>3486091>>3487537 Flowers are very good at talking. :raritywink:

>>3487940 :duck:

>>3486468 One day I'll write something that people keep coming back to read again and again. :twilightsmile: Nice to see you around too!

>>3487073 High praise indeed!

>>3487078 mhm! Nicely spotted. :twilightsmile:

>>3487757 I have had many cats. It is an interesting perspective to view it from.

>>3488025 Verreh nice, verreh nice... :twilightsmile:

>>3483998 She dropped it.

:trollestia:

>>3487979 Now that's an interesting reaction and I quite like that you had it. It could be seen that way, couldn't it? :twilightsmile:

Thanks all for your comments, and if I missed anyone don't be upset - I'm not ignoring you, I just can't count. :derpytongue2:

#49 · 53w, 5d ago · 6 · ·

Well.  That was. . .  Fuck.

I have never really bothered with or cared about the meanings of flowers.  I did not even know the term "psychopomp" before this.  I opened up the story page and read the description, and then curious, read a few comments.  After getting the gist of it, I read the stoy.  It still hasn't hit me with how deep this is with all the subtleties.  You have given me something to ponder for the rest of the day, archonix.  Bravo.

Kinda resulted in an updated headcanon, too.

EDIT:  just found this, and now, I have to reread the story with a comprehensive list of the meanings included.  Already checked one, and man. . .  That colt. . .  :raritycry:

#50 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3488573

It was a good story. It just didn't come as a twist.

Login or register to comment