I'm just a normal guy who likes ponies and video games.
Aussie Bronies778 stories ·448 members
Dark8,331 stories ·3,768 members
Mentally Deficient Authors1,408 stories ·630 members
Trolls Unite33 stories ·36 members
X Handled Seriously3,202 stories ·237 members
This story follows a day in Diamond Tiara's shoes, only told from the perspective of a sociopathic filly who restrains her violent urges to murder through barely contained self-control. This story has no actual violence in it but are the scrawlings of a madmare.
Proofread and edited by: Corwin Freiss, Vengeful Spirit and DarkDarsi
Now with an excellent reading by Lotus Moon that combines both this story and the sequel!
Page generated in 0.102 seconds
Total duration
1,012 users online
188,394 hits today, 2,364,530 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
This.
This needs more chapters.
MOAR!
3523334 YES! I AGREE, MOAR!!!
3523597>>3523334
I will possibly do another chapter if more people ask me for it.
3524707 Yay! Okeydokes, I'll try to publicize your story then!
3525074
Go for it!
3525129 Okay!
Hey Piecy, don't you think you should add a Comedy tag, or AU, I know it's not funny but it's not the darkest or most sensible Fic either,
Just sayin'
Wait you said the dad was dead.. but then there he was talking to her? What?
Confused....
3732573
It's revealed in Final Reckoning. Give that a read and tell me what you think.
My first impressions was this: How fricken adorable! The first half of the story had your character come off as a puppy about to attack and murder a bunny slipper. I adore stories like that! It was just so cute!
I enjoyed it immensely and found myself giggling quite a bit.
Then the parents came in in the second half and the tone went from light hearted to s**t just got real. You mentioned the other pony in the hospital? That took me off guard a bit and left me wanting to know more about this unknown foal. Which is also good. It really seems like this fic has potential for more, but it feels almost right to leave us at a one shot because it gives the reader a since of enjoyable confusion and allows us to draw our own conclusions. Also, I have to rave a bit about the intro, it was really gripping and got my attention right off the bat.
My only gripe is that, until the hospital comment, it seemed that the ponies parents were over reacting, but that's just a minor nit pick. Over all great story, I would love to see more!
4369785
I did not expect that reaction. At all! Thanks so much!
4369801 Not a ploblem! It was great!
3732573
The main character is a sociopath. Therefore, there’s a good chance that almost everything said early on about appearance and family background is a lie.
As a result, it is likely that you need to invert just about everything in the early paragraphs to get anything resembling a real description of the pony’s appearance or family background. This may even extend to figuring out the hex codes of the colors mentioned in the description of how the character looks and flipping the bits to obtain the bitwise complement of the colors and then converting those back to hex in order to obtain (at least approximately) the character’s true mane and coat colors.
I also imagine that this character is most likely a pegasus pony (or less likely a unicorn) and might be a filly, but is more likely to be a colt.
I suspect that the part about not having a cutie mark and the level of anger toward Diamonds Tiara is true, though.
11073806
I am not that smart but good job for the thought process! It’s a valid one that could very much be applied to the story.