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Octavia_Melody


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Luna plays her own infamous̒̔́̑͗̄ ̑h͛o̓r̊ͮͭ͒ͯ̓ro͑͒̋ͥ̇ͮrͫ̋́͌̽́ ̒g̃ͩ́ͫ̂͊̚aͬͥ́̿̚m͌e̓͌̾̔̆͐̏.̄

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

Kind of scared the shit out of me, so good story.

This story is amazing! Liked and fave. :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks!:pinkiehappy: It's actually my worst story. My other two are alot better. :raritystarry:

3677684 Okay. My favorite chapter was 'luna'. *trollface*

Lol I Loooove This Chapter!

5088803 Your welcome! But Seriously Why is this chapter not famous everywhere??? I mean this chapter.. it is truly something. It is perfect in all ways, I congratulate you for all the effort put into this one chapter!

uh... huh? how did u do the scary effects?

I have to admit, this was better than I expected. The narration could use a little work though, the middle left me wondering what was even happening? Where were they? What was going on with their consciousnesses? Was Luna finding herself inside the game as "Nightmare Moon" took over her body?

But the effect invoked by the text through the end was pretty striking.

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Thanks for the review and God bless! :-)

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