Nightmare Night has crept up upon the ponies of Ponyville, and they are ready for a night of fun, and terror. But when Princess Luna unexpectedly arrives it leaves the citizens of Ponyville in a horrific shock. The princess of the night is determined to show that she is no longer somepony to be afraid of, but odd events occur that make her seem to be more frightening. Angered, and saddened by her failed attempts to be loved, Princess Luna casts herself away into the Everfree Forest.
When the time strikes twelve o'clock Luna notices something peculiar about the statue of Nightmare Moon in the forest. It's missing! But it's soul hasn't gone too far.
One certain pony will have to learn a valuable lesson as the discover what's right, and what's wrong. What will everypony discover when Princess Luna returns to them once again? She is no longer the princess that had visited them on that one particular Nightmare Night.
(This fic includes a lot of TwiLuna, and one-sided TwinkiePie)
Nice. I can see the TwiLuna starting up. Only problem is the lack of Flutterdash
FTW!
But... keep going. THis looks like quite the interesting story
1819199 I was going to add FlutterDash but then I thought that Fluttershy wouldn't really be in it much because it is Nightmare Night, and we all know how she is
But I hope you continue to read as I write further 
damn it pinkie pie, you're going to ruin everything
1828514 Even though I'm writing this myself, I do find Pinkie Pie quite frustrating at times
But that's just Pinkie 
*sigh* when i started to read this i was like "oh, a new take on nightmare night? cool, maybe the author will make it less stupid than the show did it" and then the author was like "omg luna doesn't know what fun is! just like in the show! i'm so clever!" and now i'm like "should i really keep reading this? i mean even in the dark ages they know WTF fun was!" -_-
on a side note... 'her freckle-filled face' sounded like an insult for some reason.
1832114 It was never stated in the story that she didn't know what "fun" was. She just wasn't familiar with the games that were set out. She's not stupid, and I did not make her sound that way. She is just not used to the modern Equestria.
And I don't see why it sound like an insult. She has freckles, nothing wrong with that 
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CELESTIA DAMN IT PINKIE,I KNEW THIS WOULD HAPPEN
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I am really enjoying this story, I don't know what draws me in about these kinds of dark stories, they just do! I can't wait for the next chapters!
1838269 I'm glad you like it
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I just looked through your stories and saw that I have read a few of your other works, but have not fav'ed them, I will have to fix that
1838328 Well thank you kindly
I appreciate it 
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And fixed, I now await your next chapters, but no rush. I like quality over quainity
1838501 of course
Well I am off to do a little more reading before bed, good night
I think you mean "wound" which is an injury and not "womb" which is the part of the body a female caries a child.
1869993 Whoops
Thank's for catching that 
Ok I am slightly confused...is pinkie thinking of how things would have turned out if she had not freaked out, or did she use her law breaking power to somehow twist time around so none of it ever happen?
1878133 She was imagining what she thought would happen if she were to have yelled out, and scared the fillies about Luna "being" Nightmare Moon.
I'm sorry you got confused 
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Ahh I see, thank you for clearing that up
1879022 You're most certainly welcome
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There is one pairing I do not often see is Nightmare in a romantic setting...then again i am a romantic at heart
1879069 I'm also a romantic
Even though my life has no romance in it whatsoever 
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It is just so hard to find the right person to snuggle and cuddle.
1879194 It truly is
I always think I have the right person, and then they leave me 
But sometimes it inspires me to write stories. Heartbreaking stories are always the best stories to me 
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I don't know why but the dark kind of stories, pain, dark thoughts, betrayal, etc. I love those kinds of stories, all the while the victim is finding odd reasons to not stop what is happening. Either through brain washing, trancing, or even falling in love with their tormentor. I don't know why the darkness draws me in so deep and with such a warm embrace
1879236 I feel the same way. Darkness draws me in, and especially dark romances, or forbidden things
And speaking of which if you like those kinds of stories I will tell you that I am currently starting on a new story. It's called Missing Her. I'm pretty sure I'm going to make it into a long oneshot, but I will have to see. But anyways, it's about a relationship between Lyra, and Bon Bon. It starts off in the present, and Lyra is no longer with Bon Bon, but she has reacurring memories about her, and their romantic past together. It has a dark twist, and it's pretty heartbreaking, and sad. Lyra is still in love with Bon Bon, but she doesn't feel the same way about her, and it causes Lyra to do terrible things to herself, and she gets herself into a crazy mess 
Whenever I'm done with it you should definitely check it out 
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Mmm I can not wait to read it, I used to write short stories in high school but I have not picked up the pen in years but my mind is always bouncing with ideas, So if you ever just wanna bounce totally random thoughts my way feel free, My mind is pretty much Discord on high grade pot.
1879288 I've always been big on writing
I want to be a great writer, and artist one day so I started early 
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I do wish you the best of luck on both counts, and back to the types of stories. Why is it the dark blood soaked romances are often the best?
1879312 Thanks
And I'm not quite sure what it is about them that is so alluring. Maybe it's the feeling that you know something is going to happen to ruin the relationship, or it's the love you feel when the characters fight so hard even if it seems all hope is lost, or maybe it's just the anticipation, and anxiety it gives you 
There are so many reasons, not enough brain to think of them all 
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Also that icon is pretty damn hot....I just had an idea...for a pretty good story even though it might already be out there
1879350 Isn't it?
I love me some FlutterDash yuri 
And I think you should write it if you have a good idea 
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I sent you a PM of the idea
1918789 Oh my goodness!
You're too kind to say so! 
I'm very very happy that you love my stories so well! It really makes me more confident in my writing knowing that at least somepony out there enjoys reading them 
I wish I could get featured, but I guess I will have to try really hard! 
I more than enjoy your stories
Honestly I'm surprised that you haven't got featured yet 
1921157 I really wish I could, but the featured stories are very very good!
Maybe one day I will, but I'm sure that is every writers dream. 
I already hate Pinkie Pie, seriously what is wrong with her?
Oh great going Pinkie Pie! Seriously, what the heck?
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You just had to say it didn't you?
This was a great story, however if the ending took place before Twilight first kissed Luna, that means none of it happened so is Twilight and Luna in a romantic relationship or no?