Rainbow's Confession

by KoraldoMeetsPonies

A Night To Remember

As Applejack and Rainbow Dash walked back to Ponyville together, they couldn't help but notice a weird feeling going on inside of them. Rainbow looked over at Applejack. "Dang what a body!", she thought to herself. Applejack quickly looked over at Rainbow with a weird face. Rainbow quickly looked away as fast as she could.

"So what was that all about?", asked Applejack.

"What do you mean?", Rainbow said pretending like nothing happened.

"I saw you lookin over here at me..."

"Oh come on, I was not!"

"Geez Rainbow, what are ya doin checkin me out or somethin?", Applejack said jokingly as she chuckled to herself.

"Yeah, hehe...I mean nono of course not because that would be silly!"

Rainbow began to look really nervous and started sweating. Applejack just stared at her with bewilderment. "What is up with her?", she began thinking to herself. But that's when she herself realized that Rainbow also had quite the body. She began looking at her with an entranced look. "NO!", she screamed to herself. "Stop lookin or your gonna get caught...", she then said aloud,

"Well Rainbow, I am officially starvin at this point. Lets double time!"

"Alright then I guess..."

They both finally made it back to Ponyville and headed straight for the cafe. They found a nice table with a great view of the mountains on the far edge of the place. They each sat at one side of the fairly small circular table. To break the ice Rainbow asked, "So what will you be getting Applejack?"

"Oh shoot! I can't decide between this here daisy sandwich special or the extra large hay platter."

"Well why don't we get both and share them?

"Ya serious?", said Applejack with a bizarre facial reaction.

"Well yeah why not?", the Pegasus said scratching the back of her head. "Well if you don't want to..."

"No! I mean...yeah sure why not? Doin this here fancy mathematics, its actually cheaper!"

"Well its settled then!", Rainbow didn't realize the huge smile that was on her face.It just made Applejack laugh on the inside. "Oh Rainbow", she thought to herself. Applejack then looked at Rainbow Dash only to find that she was looking at here with a "I love you" face. Applejack couldn't help but stare back into her. "Those purple eyes...", she thought. They both didn't realize that they were slowly leaning towards each other getting ready to kiss when all of a sudden-

"Excuse me ladies. But are you ready to order?"

They both instantly broke out of their trance and looked up at the waiter pony that had came.

"Ugh yes...", said Applejack. "We both agreed to get the hay platter with the daisy sandwich special."

Rainbow just nodded to confirm that she agreed.

"Ok then. We will be back with everything in about 5 minutes.", the waiter pony said as he walked away.

Rainbow Dash looked back at Applejack who was in return looking at her. Applejack then said,

"So really what was that all about? Why were you lookin at me like that when we was walkin back here?"

"Look I still don't know what your talking about Applejack. I was just looking in your general direction not AT you! I mean geez do you think I was honestly checking you out?"

"I don't know...to tell you the truth...", Applejack said as she looked away.

Rainbow looked at Applejack with surprisement. "Applejack...do you think I like you or something?"

Applejack looked back and said, "Well I do know one thing for sure..."

"What is it?"

"Look I'll tell ya'll later. Here comes our food...", she then pointed to the waiter pony returning with their grub.

"There you are ladies. Now if you could pay the 20 bits for this?"

Rainbow pulled out 20 bits and gave them to the waiter.

"I hope you enjoy everything and please come again.", he said as he walked away.

Applejack stared at everything and said, "Man I sure can't wait to dig in!"

"Well what are you waiting for?" Rainbow asked as she ate a sandwich whole.

Applejack began with the hay and then ate a sandwich. It didn't take them no time at all until it was all gone.

"Still hungry?", asked Rainbow. "Because I can buy more-"

"No Rainbow. I'm fine. Thank you so much for this kind dinner."

She went around the table and hugged Rainbow. This was it. They both felt it. They stared at each other again.

"Uhhh...hehe...this may sound silly but...you wanna stay at my house tonight? I could use your company."

Rainbow shouted without hesitation, "YES! ...I mean sure why not? Hehe..."

Both ponies looked around feeling incredibly awkward.

"Well, uh, Rainbow, shall we leave for home now?" Applejack said awkwardly.

"Yeah its getting late."

They both walked to Sweet Apple Acres and went into the barn.

"Shoot! I forgot we don't have a spare bed!", Applejack said with disappointment.

"Well...I could always sleep in the same bed with you..."

"That wouldn't feel weird to you?", asked Applejack.

"Honestly no."

"Well alrighty then!"

The ponies walked upstairs and into Applejack's room. Applejack hopped on the right side and Rainbow slipped into the left.

"G'night Rainbow!" Applejack whispered.

"A-applejack....?", Rainbow stuttered.

"What?", Applejack rolled around facing her.

Immediately Rainbow leaned in and kissed Applejack. Applejack's eyes were wide open now. But Rainbow's were closed. Applejack slowly also closed hers as well. Nothing but a long passionate kiss. It didn't take long for Rainbow's tongue to slip into Applejack's mouth. Applejack just greeted it with her own. Both of the ponies were just absolutely lost in lust. Like there was no way this could be broken right now. Both of their minds just wandering off...

Applejack pulled away. "Rainbow...are we...", she was cut off by Rainbow putting her hoof over her mouth.

"Applejack...I love you."

Applejack just stared back with the happiest smile she ever had.

"I love you too Rainbow!!"

They both hugged each other and layed their heads together. They had both officially let each other know their feelings for one another. Both of them fell asleep holding each other. It had been and still was the best night ever.

Comments

[SpringWonder]

I admit Appledash is one of my favourite shippings, but the pacing does seem quite rushed with no build up to their relationship in this story.

[KoraldoMeetsPonies]

I know its does seem rushed...well this information hurts...but it helps too I guess

[Skittles48]

Best pair ever, but I must agree with iraqlobstah, it's pretty boring. Also, you should make the interactions and dialogue more realistic, as if you could imagine a real person saying it to another.

[KoraldoMeetsPonies]

302371 and for YOU sir why would you even look it up if you don't like appledash?

[KoraldoMeetsPonies]

I'm not gonna I lie. i wanna give up now

[IraqLobstah]

303089
Because i like to troll comments

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

[2nd]

Honestly... It feels extremely rushed. Goes from running in the wilds to getting dinner to kissing and being in love? I am sorry buy in 1.5k words... you should really only get through the running/dinner (if that)...
You have potential. Just keep working at it.

[KoraldoMeetsPonies]

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I'm not I'm done.

[MadManMav]

Well I, for one think its a good story, and dont think it needs a huge back story, its like a movie, you can have an hour of story line with no action, but we all know that most people watch for the action.long story short I think you should keep going I wish to see how it ends!

[KoraldoMeetsPonies]

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You sir...are the first one EVER to say something positive........this is the first light of hope you gave me! Track and you just MAY see a chapter 3!

[MadManMav]

Well no problem, and i think i will track it, keep up the good work!

[tigrean]

It was rushed but if anyone watch the series I hate to say it but the back story is right there, but i do look forward to ch 3. To tell he truth my story is also a little rushed as well but I mainly wanted to get people to understand the world and the way my main interacts with it for the first couple of chapters Again I look forward to ch 3 keep up the work