"Some of you will fall, others will make it through. but you all will suffer before this is over." - Centurion Cobalt Snow, 8011 After Empire
In the year 8010, Twilight Sparkle refused the crown. In that same year the Fallen Gorge War started, drafting all able bodied men and women. Twilight revived a Cohort, the 7th of the 1st Legion.
Now, with their fates seemingly sealed by a nonexistent king and a rebellion 3 million strong, Twilight and Fire Flight must be willing to face impossible odds and their own inner demons if they hope to save a crumbling empire.
"It is an endless cycle of Night and Day, war is what begun this nation, and it will end it just as swiftly."- Commander Hurricane, 504 A.E.
Chapters (8)
I'm pretty hooked on this now; looking forward to how the story progress.
A platoon, a unit of roughly 30 men and usually used in conjunction with 2 others to form a company is not an ideal grouping to divide a legion, which is typically around 5000 men, into. Nor would a legion fit into an order of battle also containing platoons. I would recommend using cohorts as your low level tactical Grouping so you don't seem so autistic
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Okay, thank you. I was sort of wondering about it, anyways.
The way you handle the military in this story is absolutely retarded, why you insist on using modern and roman terminology together baffles me. But if your going to do it, do it right. A cohort is bigger than a century by alot. A cohort being 480 men and a century being 80. A regiment consists of 2-3 battalions and a battalion is around 800 men. So if you MUST keep this pants on head retarded system it should go: legion, regiment,battalion,cohort,century. Now keep in mind that this doesn't fucking work because a regiment is 1600 men roughly and a legion like this ( early empire ) would be 1500 men. So there's no fucking need for the regiment to be there because you can only have one in a legion and that's fucking useless, so remove it. The battalion don't work because you can't easily split 800 men into 480 men groups. So stop being retarded and use modern or roman designations. Go full legion or go full regiment.
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woah, chill. I fixed it, no need to get all wound up. But anyways, I'm not in the military, mister hotshot, if you have not noticed. I'm 15 for Christ's sake. So seriously calm down, your advice is helpful, but you need to work on delivery. 