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Lunarus Solaris Nexus


I write mostly non cannon breaking fanfics that involve no shipping. Most are centered around the military of Equestria so if you like that kind of thing you aren't going to be disappointed

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how is this story nearly past The Element of Honor in views! This is unreal!

Comment posted by Lunarus Solaris Nexus deleted Nov 7th, 2013

Last time I checked, Chrysalis had a green mane.

3930023 It's not really a mane at all. What she had on at first was a disguise. Her mane is normally a strange kind of gray blue color.

sorry cover art make me think midnight blossom:yay:

4036328 That's because it is. Just another name. I can't drawl :derpytongue2:

Error: job on pony wanted. Pretty sure it's no

This isn't good at all. A zebra hybrid can bring a pony to life but the princess of the night can't

5212658 Necromancy isn't a very common thing to even do. That's black magic. Luna in my universe doesn't dabble in it for fear of having a Nightmare Moon relapse.

stop shattering the forth wall!!!
my screen has been broken enough with all the ponies coming through it.

i has like a spiderweb with a hole in the middle of it

the fourth wall is officually shattered in the most blunt way possible.
‘What’s the writer thinking here? Does he just want another fight scene?’ she thought to herself.


i'm speechless but i will attempt speech anyways,
good job on everything but this, i mean when other stories break the fourth wall at least they try to use a character which it would seem believeable with but then almost never use the main character for it as it is increadibly hard to pull off and you sir have not pulled it off,
now i understand this may be for comidic relief but it just doesn't work like this.

sorry to be blunt and step on toes but this is one of my peeves,
unless this is your writing style or the characters are ACTIVELY AWARE OF THE WRITER this does not work, and if they are they should be having an existential crisis right now
sorry

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Honestly it's been so long I can't fully remember if she was. I think she was the only one that was actually aware of the 4th wall. Hell I think she broke it WAY early in the story at the beginning.

8799911
ok I only read this one so I'm not too sure because in stories like blackroseravens stories he breaks the fourth wall but in a subtle way and with a character which one of his abilities is to break the fourth wall.

8800044
And technically the Artists notes are breaking that forth wall as I basically talk to Nexus.

“I am Master Sergeant Brand Fire But you will call me Sergeant Firebrand.” He began as he paced in front of them. “I am here to make your life a living hell. This isn’t a field trip you misguided coat hanger ninjas, this is a training facility!” Brand Fire glared directly at Hestaria. “Let me guess.” He said getting in her face. “You’re here to protect and serve Princess Luna, right?”

Hooray for Consistency... Wait If Firebrand was a Changeling in Book one, how would he know about that? Maybe Nexus told him? or Maybe that was the real Firebrand who Said that? WIll the Real Firebrand Please Stand Up

After the classes, the twenty of them were handed a bag with four hundred bits. Almost everypony, including White Knight, were elated as they were lead to the exchange with a list in hand. Upon entering, they were told to find everything on that list and pay for it upfront. Armor & boots, compass, lantern, back up lantern, two canteens a saddle bag, a larger bag, six uniforms, two maps, jacket, book of the rules of the Academy and a pen; total cost, four hundred and ten bits. Great, now they owed the academy more than two months of servitude.

Two Months in servitude for 10 bits?

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Just a common thing for The Rare Thestral to do. Idr if I established she is the last of her kind or not but I think she isnt.

9840811
Well when you arent getting paid you cant exactly pay it back until you enter active service.

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