Some time passed after the last episode from season 3: "Magical Mystery Cure". Spike is acting strange, the girls are sent to investigate but they find something that no pony would expect.
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MrMidnightSpark
Just a guy wondering how different would the world be if it's ideals were from ponykind. I try very hard to write a little (I'm not that good at it) and read a lot.
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ehhh ,meh
3426606 WUT?
I don't get it...
3426659 it was good idea but rushed as bloody heck, dude you need detail not just blaze throe it
3426689 Sorry, but that is my way of writing, I can't make it any longer. That is why I'm doing one-shots, to best my ability to write longer stories, but seems like I'm doing a horrible job...
I really suck at this kind of thing...
I just don't like extending the stories... I remember one time, I saw an author that described a bird trying to catch a worm, but was interrupted by the sound of the train...
It just didn't feel that appealing to me... Sorry...
This was good. A very promising story I must say... If you fix it. There was so much rushing it was like being bitch slapped with baloney . But, in my mind, I was expanding on it and I have to say what I thought up was pretty badass.
3427005 If you would like, you can write the way you want, all of this stories are a training for me. I aspire to make longer stories, that is why I'm doing only one-shots, I'm trying to best my abilities as a writer.
As you can see, I have only 4 stories. Two unfinished and two finished (rushed the hell out). I don't have much ability to expand my stories.
You can make whatever you want with this, my permission is granted. I only wish you could reference me somewhere (only if you want). Good luck with whatever project the future seems to hold for you.
3427051
What? This is your story. Why the hell would I steal an idea? Are you... Are you besmirching my honor?!
JK!
Ehhh???
Any who... If you want to make yourself a better writer... You have two stories here That could use a bit of work... Work on them.
3427069 Hehe, I'm not besmirching your honor... Sorry...
I'm not trying to expand this stories right now, I want to obtain more experience before I start to work out in the stories that I already have... I'm doing new ones to best my abilities, but if you think that this is the solution... Who am I to argue... When I'm feeling ready I will start to work this out.
Sorry for the mistakes in the stories, Im not even a native English speaker...
I read, read, read and read, but I still lack in expanding my stories. It just don't feel right for me to do that, so it appears to be rushed...
3427644 Haha, thanks. Spike is really badass.
3427971 didnt understand the way the texts were placed, like how celestia immediately said its somptn thatll kill everybody
honestly I have no idea as to what the point of this was.
3440181>>3435427 Sorry for not getting to your likings... I'm just a apprentice writer, I aspire to become a better writer, it means that I need training, this stories are my training, so, they're awful... Sorry...
Some day I will be better, but this day may be far from now... Just, sorry...
3452313 sokay
3452313 I wasn't saying it was awful, I'm just saying I was confused.