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corrosive dash


i'm a 19 year old latino, i love to type when i have time to myself. and my friends call me corrosive since i like chemistry and people say i have great idea's for story's.

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Cyborg unit "Contra" has been created by an unknown force to destroy all life on any planet it is sent to, but unit "Contra" crash landed onto Equestria's surface creating a large crater in the soil. The landing has corrupted the data, leaving "Contra" without orders and to roam freely. Landing way off from her destination, "Contra" is located in the deep trenches of the Everfree Forest, surrounded by the creatures attracted by the crash. Near the Everfree is a sweet yellow Pegasus by the name of Fluttershy as she was helping a family of ducks cross by and she has seen the crash, her curiosity has sparked as what has crashed, and slowly but nervously ventured into the forest to find what caused the crash.

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Comment posted by wolfman93 deleted Nov 1st, 2013
Comment posted by corrosive dash deleted Nov 1st, 2013
Comment posted by wolfman93 deleted Nov 1st, 2013

I'm only going to say this once.
"The Iron Giant"
That is all.

I am not going to say this is a wonderful story right now, but I can see loads of promise in it. Please continue is all I can say.

3431426 so whens the next chapter

I was actually thinking of making a similar story...like, creepy similar, only difference is he's male and remembers his programming, just refuses to execute it

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