Fear...
Darkness...
All he felt was agony and terror. Somehow, he knew he deserved it, and that this could be his punishment. twenty years before he was forced into his shadow form, then another thousand before he even tried to move again. Then he lost. One burst of energy was all it took to destroy him. Everypony else thought he was gone forever, even himself. What will happen when he's given another chance to live? Will he be able to right past wrongs? Or is it simply easier to revert to the dark?
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Interesting. Continue.
I have to say it is promising. The idea that Sombra's corruption was due to the alicorn necklace is an interesing take on him.
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Is that the way it ended up looking? I thought I wrote him creating the Alicorn Amulet himself.
After rereading the chapter, I have to say you are correct. You wrote him making it, though I suspect he probably wore it as a reminder of his hate, which probably caused an emotional feedback loop. Still looking forward to not-crazy Sombra.
A good story indeed, my friend. My canon is a little different, with Sombra being called Shadow Walker and being Luna's colt friend... Until something happened and he ended up being the Sombra we already know. If you like, take a look and give me your opinion, I would really apreciate that. Your canon is very good structured and creative, good luck with this story and in future projects, see you later.
3786537 The funny part about this is that I've technically been working on the idea in my head since the release of Magic Duel.
I am intrigued, go on.
Yeah, Pinkie's mane is pretty amazing, seriously, I think she keeps everything in there. Could probably find a balefire bomb from FO:E in there, even though it's in a different damn universe.
when will the Next chapter come? this story is so amasing, i can almost not wait!
3963994 I'm working on it, though 3D modeling takes up a lot of time.
3896837 not funny.
don't joke about balefire bombs
3979568 Would you prefer I joke about chemical weaponry? Or perhaps the end of the world? Or maybe even genetic engineering, we all know how well that turned out. Or how about we joke about how Blackjack became a red and black alicorn OC, who's also a robot.
4001837 1. i was messing around as well. 2. if your trying to call Blackjack a Mary Sue then you obvious don't know what a Mary Sue is... also she is not an alicorn, she is a Cyber unicorn with wings
4003581 I know man, I'm just joking. It was a funny thing I realized after that chapter when I was talking with my friend. Also, and I'm not saying Blackjack is one, but it did say the augments she got were meant for alicorns, leading me to believe she became a cyber one.
4003636 just because they where originally meant for one doesn't mean she is apart of another race of ponies. the only reason it makes sense that the augmentations where for a alicorn is because there is no other reason for a horn and wings to be on the same system. also it amuses me that i am discussing project horizons with someone in the comment section of a story i havn't read
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Could one of you explain to me what you're talking about?
4004117 are you familiar with the Fic "Fallout Equestria"? we are talking about one of the more popular fics based off that one, Project Horizons.
4004529 I've seen a lot of works under the title Fallout: Equestria, but I couldn't figure out which one was the original.
4011339 the original is by Kkat and it is simply called Fallout Equestria the spin-offs are the ones with something after that.
"You haven't planned it yet."
"A minor inconvenience."
For Pinkie Pie, it's not even a problem at all. I must say that I enjoy where this story is going, good on ya Dear Author, and keep it up.
Pinkie Pie can be really different at times, but she is Pinkie after all. Good chapter, keep it up. I want Sombra to attune with his sins. I think he really is good, but had turned evil. It is my headcannon. Good luck with the story!
Wuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut? Sorry it's not anything productive, but that was the best I could come up with. Soooo, twenty bits that's a doppelganger put in place by someone to get Sombra in trouble!
4257923 Any takers for this bet?
I. Fucking. Called it. SOMEONE OWES ME MONEY, DAMMIT! Annnnnnyway, this is getting more and more interesting, nicely done.
4273247 Called what, exactly?
4273270 Doppleganger.
WOW no one has even commented on this chapter!
Well I am most entertained by this chapter THANKS
Well that excelled quickly
still hilarious though
but still that was like boom WAN'T TO BE FRIENDS
I was expecting a fight
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE THERE HAS TO BE MORE!
If that is alright with you
That was an interesting start
Aurora... was she an adult? cuz I can't palce it.
6604070 They're supposed to be around the age for late in high school/early college by the time Aurora died. I definitely could have done time transitions better.
You got the colors of the Alicorn Amulet wrong. The gem is dark red and the wings aren't yellow.
It lives, excellent
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Despite my colourblindness, this difference is actually intentional. It's been explained already.