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While trying a new spell, Twilight accidentally teleports herself and her friends to the Capital Wasteland. Unaware that there is no coming back, they bump with Jason, The Lone Wanderer. How will this interfere in his journey? Will they be able to survive the harsh conditions of the Wasteland? And how will Jason react over his new companions?
Just remember that I don't own My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic OR the Fallout series.
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fisrt he didnt know any mention of dr Li before you talk to her and second she is not very friendly towards the player untill she recognise you i know you needed to make it short but i feel it was way to short for the potential of rivet city and its quests
3440661 Ummm... Jason did know about Doctor Li, because after the 'Galaxy News Radio' quest, Three Dog gives you photo of her. I forgot that she isn't friendly towards Jason 'cause I haven't played Fallout 3 since last month. I think I'll rewrite it. Thanks for the reminder!
and so i shall say one of my favorite lines "LET THE BODY'S HIT THE FLOOR"
hhhhmmm? what if one of the mane six turned into a ghoul?
Really? You're armed with a .38 caliber hunting rifle and some light armor? Are you a pleb? Find some power armor or something to impress the pon3s!
3454899 Man, you guys are incredibly creative! Good idea by the way...
3454976 Hmmm... maybe on later chapters? I plan to add some badass power armor and laser rifle gunfights. He's using the 38. caliber hunting rifle because it's one of my favorite weapons
, but keep calm, cause the enclave is coming...
3455560 yeah to bad i cant focus for more than three seconds to write a story
Things are moving along kinda quickly, but so far so good. Keep up the good work.
sorry about this men but again way to fast and you forgot the holotape "better times" i thinks its called when he listen for the first time the voice of his mother i see your wanderer he has a lot of potential but lacks attachmen to the things he does
he doesnt feel like the " lone wanderer" at all well just my opinion
good idea of story though
3457654 Man, just feel free to comment about any errors. Jason is going to lose his title of Lone Wanderer in a radio broadcast, maybe. Keep commenting, please
3457205 I'll try to improve on this. Thanks
its good but still a bit too fast pasted for me man
listen to this when you play the fallout games
3457881 why that song gave me the image of the vault dweler , the chosen one, the lone wanderer, and the curier rasing they pipboys to a fith guy who will be on fallout 4
3457904 Fingers crossed for Fallout 4 or whatever name Bethesda gives to it!
3457205 i agree but still a very good chapter
3457909>> they have covered the tribals the wanderers the brotherhood they have yet to make an enclave wanderer or maybe a china wasteland with the remains of the crimsom dragoons
I saw a few grammar errors, but fantastic chapter! Fantastic, truly fantastic!
for future reference will you be doing any dlcs? cough"mother ship zeta"cough
but i like this, the first time i played the story and seen the vertabird i said and i quote "the F#$% is that"
3487866 Broken Steel is a good option. The other dlcs, however, on sequels. I think I'm going to promote you as my personal idea giver!
Well, problem it is that I haven't played Mothership Zeta. I only played Point Lookout and Operation Anchorage.
3485826 Thanks for reading it, man! I am eagerly waiting your next chapter in your fic!
3487913 zeta doesn't add to much to the story but if you ever play it check everything on the first time through (i didn't!
)
plus it has some great equipment to use makes things easier
i dont know i liked the earlier chapters better
Why is there no romance tag because it looks like a twi-wonder romance unless ..............oh my Luna
3488500 Yeah, I need to add it. Thanks for the reminder!
3488406 Maybe the project reactivation made it feel boring? I felt that too when I was writing it. But I think it was necessary... And I have to admit that I'm stuck with next chapter.
3489045 not boring the character felt real on that part its just the actions one cannot get a grab of the enviroment without playing the game
3489376 You're right. I really need to play FO3 again. Maybe I'll get it's incredible atmosphere for the second time.
As soon as I do my own story like this, I find out someone is doing something like it
Well at least there in Vegas instead of The Capital Wasteland.
Another good chapter...not much else to say.
Yeah, Lone Wanderer is a little too gullible even though he have reasons.
I would've thought they were crazy still. Even if they are serious, all crazy people are always serious
3498056 The Lone Wanderer in this story doesn't think that they're crazy mostly because in the Capital Wasteland, crazy shit happen everyday
3497771 I have no problem with it, man. Good luck with your fic!
3498262 Thank you. I will no doubt give your fic a good read to try and keep from copying your ideas in the sequel where a few Equestrians go to The Capital Wasteland. Good luck on this and future stories.
you mean
3498257
People also dyed their hair in the wasteland too
And also do drugs
3501113 Thanks for pointing this out! I'll edit it right away
hhhhmmmm? how will the girls react to fwaks when they find him?
my prediction
you poor thing
do you want i yay-im-finaly-free party?
i dont trust you(typical rainbow)
your poor cloths are ripped and look horred
he seems t'ah be tellin the truth
probably just staring at Jason
oh and 101 views hahahahaha............ what? its ironic.
i get it
3504597 Man, you're just awesome! I'll give your prediction a 10/10!
You, good sir, have bested me, and all my writing, congratulations!
3507088 As I see it, you're enjoying this story. I have bested you? You can't be serious
Really...
3506349 yay
my one concern is that super mutants die way to easy
Sorry mate. I tried. But everything about this story feels rushed. The girls should have much stronger reactions to watching someone take a life, let alone taking lives themselves. You barely gloss over that.
You skip a lot of details that make this kind of story. Don't assume that because we're reading this story we know everything about Fallout 3. There's bound to be a few readers who haven't.
New speaker gets a new line. There is no exception to that rule. Ever. Seeing you constantly break that rule is aggravating, especially as you promised to improve after the first chapter.
Spend some time and effort on the actual writing. It feels like you're just vomiting words on the page. Also, get a proof-reader, to pick up the more glaring issues.
So I'm enjoying this so far. I'll stick around to see how it goes.
Also, since Fluttershy is so friendly with animals, I think it'd be pretty cool if she got her own little companion, like a Yao guia cub or a baby death claw or something. Just a thought. :D
3508784 Maybe because this is story is more focused on realism than the game mechanics (Taking 15 5.56 shots in the head and not dying? really?) So it's easy to die. That's everything
3510713 INSTANT RESPONSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3509015 Sorry if this hasn't been something well-written, since it's my first fic. I've tried my best. But now that I've written 7 chapters, it's going to be difficult to retry. And looking at the way you commented, it looks like that you were expecting a masterpiece (Not trying to argue over here, just my point of view.) from a dude that joined this site 3 weeks ago, which is almost impossible. Thanks for showing me your opinion, though.
3510243 Ummm... good idea man. I'll see what I can do.
3507701Indeed you have.