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shieldgenerator7


Software Developer, been a brony since the end of Season 1

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This is a 2000 word story to help me warm up for National Novel Writing Month, that I finished in an hour and a half. I didn't really plan it and just let the story flow from my unrefined thoughts. As such, it makes a very interesting tale about Twilight traveling to Earth to help solve a mystery about a lot of natural disasters occurring on planet Earth.

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This is awesome! I don't know how many words my yet-unfinished fan fiction has, but under two hours and you got this?

wow. I give you the creativeness of a Deadpool team-up comic writer and the story telling of a five year old, which probably isn't much of an issue concerning the challenge.

and of course - nice job including Deadpool. what else to make a random story make sense than by including Deadpool himself? since if he's involved then you already know not to take anything serious

I have one complaint though, queen chrysalis was severely out of character! I am deeply offended! she's the best mlp villain ever! how disrespectful, blah blah blah
oh wait. that was twilight? nevermind...

It's Agent Coulson. And I don't remember him being bald.

I see you really exercised that crossover tag.

Anyway, once I realized that this story was going to go completely off the rails, I just let it happen and it was okay.

Good luck on NaNo.

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Oh, oops. My bad. I never actually saw is name spelled out and just assumed it was the way I thought it was. It just felt natural to spell it that way. And I was pulling his looks from memory, so obviously some details are off.
Yep, I gave that tag the workout of its life.
Thanks! I'm gonna need it, since this is my first time doing it

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Really? A five-year-old? Awesome! I was going for three-year-old, but looks like I'm better than I thought I was!
That comment is all the more brilliant because of your awesome avatar

Glad to hear you enjoyed it!

Reading it all these years later, I'm not surprised half the people didn't like it lol

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