After a poorly timed visit from a creature of chaos inevitably goes astray, Twilight finds her world turned upside down and Discord is flabbergasted to find his world making far too much sense. With Celestia and Luna both away on royal business, the pair must figure out how to fix the dilemma they find themselves in.
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Wahooo! Thanks all so much for your support on this story, it's very humbling to see such an out pouring of likes! I am glad you all like it and I will strive to make sure the coming chapters are up to scratch.
It really means a lot to me to see some many people enjoying my story!
You have me interested.
Pray continue.
This chapter was really great! Can't wait for more
finish it! finish it! finish it!
also: DELICIOUS LEVELS OF CHAOS
dangit mitch STOP POSTING AS ME. wait... nevermind.
3453469 I try to up date weekly if I can manage it, I was able to get the second chapter out early this week as a big thank you and I will see what I can do to have the next one out ASAP
Gah!
Twice!
Um, were you using an android or an iPhone? When I use mine I tend to make same mistake with words.
You forgot the: "
There should be " somewhere in there. Shouldn't it?
I really like Discord too, but why do you do this to Twilight?
Really now?
As for the story, you've got a Like from me and I will read more later. Maybe even today!
The pacing is good and humor is nice.
I suspect there were more grammar errors, so you might want to visit proofreaders group.
Missed capitals, quotation marks to see when words end and sequence starts and a few misplaced dots.
If it would be no trouble, read your text in syllables. It's easy to spot them like that.
3463466 Thanks, I find grammar is me arch foe
I tend to talk more than I write, thanks for pointing these out and I'll do my best to hunt em down 
P.S Got all the errors you pointed out, the war goes one and thanks for the input!
Well, that was a nice short story. Pity its over. Also you forgot to mark it complete.
Queen damnit Discord...
3503576 1 more chapter for discords date with Fluttershy maybe? (plz let that be the case I want it so much.)
3503576 I did thanks for the heads up and I'll fix that shortly!
3504646 Well I may do a little spin off story on that at some point, I think it would be good fun too
lol that ending was awsome
definetly your best story yet 
3507810 Cheers, I put a lot of thought into it and I'm so glad it turned out well
Interesting premise, but this has a boatload of errors and spots of sticky writing. Standard stuff, like names and the start of sentences not being capitalized, using the wrong word (this instead of that, your instead of you're, that sort of thing), misuse of and missing commas, and words being ordered properly.
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This pleases me
3511617 Yep it's my big problem, I just seem to have a blind spot for them. I do my best to hunt down the little blighters but some always seem to make it past me. Any how thanks for the feed back and taking the time to read my story. I'll get em all eventually
3511958 Glad you liked it
Dat Ending!
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STATE YOUR RANK AND TITLE.
3614338 Doubly awesome, thanks again!
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I am so glad you finished this!!!
Thank you thank you! Merry Christmas!!!
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Your most welcome and have a great new years to!
This was good.
5314677 Thanks, so glad enjoyed it
Entertaining story for sure. The material would make a nice epos; but a four-chapter romp works fine as well.
What really, really would have done the story a ton of good though would have been a proofreader. It's chock full of spelling and punctuation mistakes which can be quite jarring at times.
Still, the flow and entertainment value of the story does even that out to a very large degree.
All in all: have a green thumb
5407955 So glad you enjoyed it. Yeah I am only now working with a dedicated editor, others who helped me have been really great but a very busy with their own lives. I may get back to it in the future and tidy things up.
Thanks for taking the time to read it
That's a point, Discord never promised not to swap species with Spike...
5475081 Cue evil laugh
ok thats awkward for twilight for sure
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