'Lock'n'Bolt' wants to make a name for him self and he's going the right way about it. With the Element of Honesty in his saddle bags the earth pony stallion seeks to become lost in the winding streets of Canterlot and to revel in his victory.
But such infimy comes at cost along with the thrill, little dose he know that the law is closer upon him than he first believed. Lock'n'Bolt may have evaded the watchful eyes of the Day Guard, but in the shadows of the lower city he soon discovers that the darkness dosen't just conceal him.
(This is a short story for the Bat pony write off on EQD.
Here's the link: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2013/10/the-batpony-writeoff.html#more for those interested and please be sure to support all the writers entering!)
A story about a thief stealing the element of honesty?
Sounds awesome.
Err well it would have been if he didnt lose it right after stealing it.
Thanks for the input, I like to think that it wasn't that he was couldn't keep hold of it, just that Night Guard were just better at the cops and robbers game than he was. Any how thanks for taking the time to read my story
I enjoyed reading this
4476809 Thanks so glad you did, I am hoping to work more with the chars at a later date so watch this space
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You're welcome
and okay.
Wow, that was a fun little one-shot. Great Work!
4580453 Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it