• Member Since 11th May, 2013
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Sonicshadow555


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It's late at night, and you're sitting by your computer, unaware of the things going on around you. Your parents are gone for the night, and you are alone. Suddenly, a strange sound of... hooves on your front porch disturbs you from whatever you were doing. You decide to investigate. What you see shocks you.

Made for EQD Nightmare Night 2013 contest.

EDIT: Damn it, just realized this story is too short to be accepted in the contest... and I can't submit another one... Oh well, maybe next year.

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Comments ( 14 )

I'm confused. How does a story not have category tags?

Edit: That's better.

3325318
Wow... did I really forget category tags? I guess I was too excited about writing this.

:twilightoops: Good thing Nightmare Moon isn't rea- whassat? No...NOOOOOOO...........NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!*blood spatters onto screen*

2spooky4me
(Great story!)

Logic check: Why would Nightmare Moon transport "me" back to my own bed before killing me? Just to mess with "me" more?

3325742

cause shes nightmare moon? why not scare the crap outta someone, also dude you abandoned your own dog! wth!?

3326041
Not me. YOU. This story is in second person. Meaning the readers are in this position.

3327213

i would never abandon my dog! :twilightangry2:

I really like this, mostly because it's in second person and I don't see much of that.

3327218
Okay, okay, maybe not. But maybe some of my other readers would.

3329469

that makes them meanies! :pinkiegasp:

what happens after that?

3332189
Pretentious sequel is pretentious. Nah, I don't think I'll do a sequel. Make up what happens next in your own mind.

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