this is what happns when me and my old friends jazz and zera want to take me away from my friends
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hey hey hey potatos stay out of ym shed
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I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but the writing in this story is just atrocious.
the writing is unbalanced, weird, and though not hard to understand, it isn't very descriptive.
I don't think it deserves a like, but im liking it anyway.
I will help you, though.
Just PM me, and i will help you write better, if you want.
good effort though
312988 wow? really? thanks! well i am working on a fanfic series called time hoppers about time travle and breaking the 4th wall it has the cruesaders in it but really thanks!
314923 Sure, just show me a PM of what you have, and i'll try to help you the best i can. :D
so, i just read this.
all the way to the end.
do i have any idea what is going on still?
nope.
"still a better fic than my immortal" - blind man.
thumbs up, for the brain scrambling.