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two faced

this is my story of how i had a evil clone from a spell

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LunaUsesCaps

LunaUsesCaps #1 · Mar 1st, 2012 · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

6-Star Fic, beautifully written and composed like a masterpiece.

You had your whole audience captivated the entire time. The way you showed true emotions instead of jumping into the romance was absolutely beautiful. Your fic made me laugh and cry at the same time, I was so moved by it. I couldn't find one mistake at all, you are an amazing author and this is the best piece of fan art I have ever read. If you submitted this to Equestria Daily, it would probably get at least 20,000 views. Please, keep writing! Don't keep this amazing talent to yourself!

ARBPW

ARBPW #2 · Mar 1st, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I... I'm speechless. Never has there been such drama and emotion packed into 1500 words. Absolute masterpiece.

Dracoraun

Dracoraun #3 · Mar 1st, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

This story... It made me a man. It told me to man up and finish my stories. I... I loved it so much that I am crying in pain. I applaud you good sir, I applaud you.

Mayclore

Mayclore #4 · Mar 1st, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

278171 It'll make men out of men.

It'll even make men out of women, carrots, some species of bird, and the occasional meerkat.

dastrdlyW

dastrdlyW #5 · Mar 1st, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

You're kidding. You're kidding right? Please tell me this is a mockery of badly written fics with no grammar at all? Please? I honestly can't tell anymore.

potatos