In 1800 England, a human by the name of Phillips Rosario was going to be burned at the stake because of his power. He has the power to conjure up any and every instrument and play each of them like a professional. As he was waiting in his cell, a pit magically opened. On a whim he jumped to escape, but on the other side showed a world of talking ponies. Will he ajust and begin his new life here? Will he be accepted for who he is or be executed all over again.
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You did it.
Not sure what yet, but you did.
3320940 oh youll see
This is good...
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Sorry for the grammar nazi-ness but in the desciption:
it's adjust
other than that good start
you might want to get an editor though there are little mistakes here and there. I could proofread/edit for you if you like or you could find someone else. You should find someone though.
You have my attention.
Plaid*
Braced*
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Dint want to be a dick about it.
Its really good so far, im very interested on how this stories Plot (hehe) will progress and develop.
Will this mysterious "her" be explained soon? Is the mystery girl Phillips girlfriend or something? These are questions that need to be answered!!
Random moustache!
3397498 i donno
... I'm uneasy at this point. I want to admit my skepticism for this story. I feel like it's being rushed.
Huh. Surprised I didn't see this yet. interesting enough.
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THUS FIC MUST STAY ALIVE AND BY GOD IF I HAVE TO MAKE IT SO BY FINDING WHERE YOU LIVE AND WRITING IT DOWN MYSELF THEN BY GOD ALMIGHTY I WILL MAKE IT SO!