3958324 I think she just found his egg somewhere and decided that what ever hatches, she will treat it as her adopted child btw that Celestia rage mode
Good story so far.Very few misspelled words yet still understandable.And thats basically all that i can think of that was wrong with this story(Grammar wise)other than that it was quite the well written story.Anyway i hope that your grammar has improved a lot since this was written and that your're having a good life and always willWell if needed,once i get a new mouse i will try to be of as much assistance as i can be of.
4858938 you know i was just gonna write exactly the same thing you just said, good thing i stopped to read a bit first. It's redundant to say i agree but i'll say it anyways. Couldn't agree more
Celestia went into Mama Bear mode. lol.
Damn, Finally! I hated that thing (Blueblood) was wandering around the castle. Good thing it's taken care of.
Er....son?
laid egg...how?
I mean, its not bad...just some exposition would be bice
3958324 I think she just found his egg somewhere and decided that what ever hatches, she will treat it as her adopted child
btw that Celestia rage mode
anyone know where the nearest ursa major lives cause I think I would stand a better chance against it then enraged celestia
on a side note, MY EYES THEY BURN!!!!!
I'd like a lobotomy to remove the part of my brain holding that image of a naked blue blood running away in fear please.
if celetia is that protective can trade her for my mom
Also any one got any mentlie bleach for that blueblood nude image PLEEAASSEE!?!?!
Good story so far.Very few misspelled words yet still understandable.And thats basically all that i can think of that was wrong with this story(Grammar wise)other than that it was quite the well written story.Anyway i hope that your grammar has improved a lot since this was written and that your're having a good life and always willWell if needed,once i get a new mouse i will try to be of as much assistance as i can be of.
4858938 you know i was just gonna write exactly the same thing you just said, good thing i stopped to read a bit first. It's redundant to say i agree but i'll say it anyways. Couldn't agree more
Huh, I kinda expected this to have more comments and views.
The fact that blueblood was naked surprisingly doesn't bother me at all
4407138 Sorry I'm all out
7420646 Um others will find that disturbing... But a female BlueBlood.... Now that I want to see....
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I can't believe i'm typing this but I agree.