" Eyes or no eyes I'm a god to this world either way."
" What happened to the Harmony that lived in you?"
" Harmony and Despair are only words, the power within an Equestrian is what's really worth from us. If you fail to believe then I guess you'll just have to see a special friend of mine." The unicorn in question placed her hands on the ground where a sigil was made beneath her. " Reanimation!"
After Twilight's insanity brought on Princess Celestia she begins her plan of changing the world from it Harmony to a test of power. Many have fallen and are now heartless beings serving her needs. As she slowly tears away her own body for power few dependable fighters take a last stand to save Equestrian as the Elements of Harmony no longer can.
Chapters (2)
Grammar? What's that?
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i don't follow you?
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Your description has a few rough spots.
"Harmony and Despair are only words the power within an Equestrian..." (Should be either two sentences or have a comma here.)
"After Twilight's insanity brought on the [?] Princess Celestia she begins..."
[?] (It looks like there are a few words missing here?)
When I opened this story I thought, "Hmm continuation of than possessed or schizophrenic Twilight story I read a while ago, could be interesting," and without further reading description dived into first chapter. Then there was mentioning of hands, I went to original and confirmed than there were hooves before. So I filed it as error, such things happen in fanfiction. Then you mentioned some girl with nothing less than giant robot. "What a heck," was my first thought, "where did she come from?" I like "Alternate Universe" stories because I can see what would ponies do when facing different situations, but adding humans (aside from comedy "Hands" or stories like "All-American Girl" or "Pillow Case") is for me diminishing their abilities to deal with their own problems and world in general.
Therefore I need to ask, why to start equine story only to change it to anthro and on top of that add some obscure little known anime show. Also I would suggest adding Crossover tag, probably instead of Tragedy; since it is covered in Dark already or instead of Alternate universe since Anthro + Human is covering that pretty well.
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Thanks for pointing that out. I'll admit I did that kind of on purpose.
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I only changed the story to anthro because when CapcomWarrior told me to write the first story earlier I assumed it to be about them in their pony forms. If it were up to me it would be anthro all the way. Human as it says just stands for the girl with ' the robot' and she's the only human I'm adding unfortunately. I guess I can't blame you for being confused. I'm still a little of a newbie I believe, but thanks for clearing this up.
Well, before I read... does humanity come to Equestria and declare that twilight is guilty of some sort of offence of a galactic law and Humans declare war on her nation?
One question how the hell is the hummy and where she come from? Kind of through off the story for me at first I thought I read the wrong prequel cause there is a shit ton of wtf is going on.
I see this could be a great story, but I noticed its on hiatus
? Are you going to continue with this later on?
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Of course. Just not right now. I just have a ton of stories that are in stock that I must finish.
Don't worry though, I never abandon my stories.