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Needs editing, Airman.
yes just in time to read the new chapter. so far it is great
Horsey Illuminati confirmed!
Interests piqued.
6660685 Yeah I agree but my normal editor is currently backed up.
Edit: Been in the works looking for a couple of backups but so far my search has been fruitless.
6660732 Hopefully that's a good thing?
6660705 Glad you like it so far
6660781 yay
Changelings, conspiracies and foreshadowing? Interesting times ahead for our Tech Sgt.
6660802 Let us hope so.
6660826 like it, i love it i read it 3 days straight when ever i had time to read it on my laptop, tablet ,hell even on my phone before watching a movie in a theater. hands down your story had capture me, you got me hook and i can get enough of your story. you are a talent writer and producing quality work.
6660844 Thanks for the praise, although I'm really not that great of a writer (If I was I wouldn't have so many chapters needing editing ) Still it is great to hear that my attempts have been enjoyed by so many from this site. Hope to continue writing this to the end and hope that all of you keep coming back satisfied.
Perkele, You've just forced me to read through all the time i should have been sleeping. Eucalyptus that's annoying. I mean, By the Swirl of the Root! How dare you create a story so enthralling. I'll Sue Ya! But seriously, good work, now bugger off so i can sleep.
I'm happy to see the second arc and it makes me curious as to what type of relationship Chrysalis and Harmonia used to have or why Chrysalis considers Gheluli a fake. Also, the group that wants Eric is interesting as they have a mysterious purpose for Eric and are not afraid to rely and backtalk to Chyrsalis despite her being a powerful criminal. Hope to see more of this story.
I'm actually wondering what Chrysalis's name is in the "Equis" language.
Oh shit is Laura Bosso!!!!
This seems to smart for Blue blood.
Sombre?
Whoo! Queen Chrysalis! My favorite misunderstood villain. I'm guessing the employer was most likely Blueblood. He may not be very smart but he is devious enough.
6660796 secret societies are always a good a thing.
WOO HOO!
6661037 No But seriously glad you enjoyed it but get some sleep.
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6661508 Aren't they?
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6661295 Glad you like the twist should help to start filling in a couple of leftovers from the first arc as time goes on.
6661300 Not going to spoil anything because I've waited this long to add her to the story more so it might be a couple more chapters till it's revealed.
6661320 Not sure I follow but okay.
6661341 Maybe? Maybe not?
6661388 Let's just hope I can get her personality down. Might be Blueblood, might not, he does have a little bad blood with Eric already.
6661861 Alright, you have my attention (still). I hope a chapter will be from AJ's perspective, like to know what she feels and thinks about Eric, being an Alicorn and in a herd
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I need more coffee to enjoying dis chap...
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6661949 Now that I've pretty much established the core cast of characters I'd like to have at least a couple of chapters from other's POV to kind of delve more into their personalities that have been briefly gone into. I just hope my characterization remains close to the canon ones. But in the end they could be far apart or turn out to be fairly short chapters because the main focus of the story will be on Eric and his adventures through the world of Equus.
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6664380 Can't wait!
6697347 here here!
Forgive me if I am repeating a question, but how does Cadance become Empress of an Empire she has never lived in? Surely the local nobility would be outraged if a foreigner was placed on the throne. Sure she helped save the Empire, but you don't put just anyone on a throne. And true she is an Alicorn, but wouldn't this be seen as a plot to make the Empire a puppet state of Equestria? Just curious.
On a side note, I've never understood the point of Alicorns. Your examples make somewhat sense, but it seems counterproductive to me. Centuries upon centuries of having the same ruler, who could potentially kill everyone on a whim, and who would stop them? Nigh unlimited power both politically and magically with little to no oversight or censure? Bad combination.
6731346 I kind of touched on it in CH. 26 but Cadance became Empress of the Crystal Empire because she is the direct descendant of the ruling family before Sombra came and took over the throne.
Your other points were also briefly brought up in the same chapter as there is a vocal concern from others on if it right that alicorns should remain in power for so long when they already hold so much power by themselves. What'll come of these concerns? Well we'll just have to see how events play out as the story goes on.
6733478 Thanks for the answering those questions of mine. Looking forward to reading more.
6734256 No problem.
I'm excited to see this story again with new chapters. I'm wondering how this new arc will play out.
6763865 I am working on the next few chapters, but some important family issues came up shortly before Thanksgiving that will take most of my time for about the next 6 months. Will work on it as much as I can, but as of right now I can give no timeline on when the next time will be done. But rest assured that this story is not going away, I just have to deal with this RL stuff first.
6771090 Well I'm pretty sure you just need to take your time on this. Think of this as mineshaft, people who just want to throw crap togeather go for fool's gold thinking it will get them rich. Others dig deeper and search harder for the actual gold, those people have stories that are worth100/10.
6929254 Go back killing IS please.
TELL ME WHAT HAPPEN NEXT?
are you planning to do update chapter?
7072370 Yes, more chapters are in the works/planned but issues in my personal life are keeping me busy.
7260223 Good, because it's been so long that I'd have to re-read the story too just to tell you ,but it eventually does get explained. You just have to get through my poor attempts at writing.
7260779 Adoption.
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Of course... Heheh looks like I missed the obvious again. So obvious in fact I think that it's actually canon. ^_^;
7261079 I think that's where I got it from too, or if not official canon then it was something mentioned by the creator.