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Starlit Skies


You appear to have stumbled upon the mediocre writings of a raving brony. Congratulations.

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Luna, upon her return, resumes her pirate activities, much to the dismay of her sister. After raiding the griffon capital, she enters into a maze of treachery and lawlessness unheard of even in her time as she is chased by the armies of the kingdoms in a pursuit for eternal glory.

Image used with permission by MarbleYarns

Inspired by the song by Carbon Masetro 'Lunar Pirate':

Lovingly edited by MedicShy

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 23 )

Contrary to popular belief, this story is actually about Luna discovering The Pirate Bay.

3316520 No. I don't use pirated media. This is a story about actual swashbuckling piracy the good way,

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Well, it was a joke nonetheless. So, this entire conversation was made from a non sequitur.

3316545 Meh, at least someone actually commented on something I wrote :twilightsmile:

Nice Princess Bride reference.

Alright... You have my attention. I would like to see where this story goes... and if you would like an editor or pre-reader, all you need do is ask. :scootangel:

After a few moments of silence, Horizon timidly raised his hand, as if he didn’t know what he was supposed to do otherwise.
“Yes Horizon? No need to raise your hand next time. We’re all outlaws here.”

*hoof

That said, this is definitely a well-written and funny story; nice job. Also, I really like your name! /)o3o(\

Luna’s glare said it all: 50% amusement, 10% bemusement, 15% annoyance, and 16% pure Luna.
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3318781 It hath been corrected. Wrong race :twilightblush: But thanks as well!

Forgive my enthusiasm, but this is awesome! I mean, I woke up an hour ago and thought: "eh, I guess I'll read some stuff, whatever". And luckily I stumbled upon this fic. The vision of Luna as a rather cheerful pirate, enhanced by that Carbon Maestro's song link of which you provided made me want to wear my pirate outfit (if I had one) and sail away to seek adventures! I got little confused when you introduced a bunch of OCs at once, though, I hope you'll take time to develop them in further chapters. All in all, good job!

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what happened to the remaining 9%?

3326954 I am in the process of re-editing it to make it flow more smoothly in the future now that I've acquired an amazing editor. But I'm glad you like it so much!

3326961 It's on the moon.

I hope pipsqueak makes an appearance.
Heh.

3604693 Despite dressing up like a pirate (and being one of my favorite foals), I don't think he'd have a place in actual pirating. So, odds are no. Maybe a mention of him, but he won't show up as a character.

Zecora the pirate, with her assistant Derpy! Cool.

I know this is marked as "On Hiatus", but do you plan on continuing to write it? I'd like to see more, but I don't know if this is going to update or if it will just sort of remain paused forever.

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