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A Pony Typewriter


I create ponies literature that is fueled by bottled tea and canned lemon tea. Yes these things exist.

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Michael and Trevor isn't exactly the best of friends, or friends with good influence for that matter, but from time to time something, like sticking up a joint, getting chased by mercenaries, the federal government, chinese organized crime, robbing the most secure bank in the country, and local authorities always make them appreciate that they know each other.

After their last score, Trevor still have a little cleaning up to do, he ask his best buddy, Michael, lend a helping hand. In the process they were taken, somewhere, out of their world.

Like any other job they have done, they'll have to fund their way back

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 26 )

Pretty good writing just some grammar mistakes good story.

3361167I think there's a lot, I am not a native speaker myself but I tried.

oh god Ron. Also, I love Trevor's truck. is this version modded at all? Or should I picture it stock?

....is that sunset shimmers?

3393099Picture it stock, and the other one....:pinkiehappy:

Nice please update and continue this story.

YES !! I WANT!!! MOAR!!!

UPDATE!!! NAOW!!!!

3530604Alright, alright just don't hit me, or shoot me or soak me in gasoline and set it on fire , I'll update soon :fluttercry:

3531212 Good. But if you LIED to me, I'M GONNA CUT YOUR BAWLS AND GIVE IT TO CHOP CHOP!! I'm sure Franklin won't be mad.

Dude, you need an editor. Pretty badly, actually.

3536633I know, so far none have come up willingly, and english isn't my native, if you wanna help be my guess.
compare this with my other one i need as much feedback as possible
oh and the latest chapter were written mostly at 1AM a lot of screw up that i sure did miss.

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Calm down T! And might I suggest you taze them, and then light them on fire.

3536906 Or we can eat them and throw up and fuck them and eat them again and throw up again and re-fuck it! Good plan or VERY good plan?

Good, good. It nice, now i can wait for a few days for the update.

Dude, get an editor, I like GTAV, but this is painful to read at times.

3621735 i'll look for one, would you kindly check my other one for comparison sake

This story is making me want to replay GTA V again, if only to play as Trevor again.... By Celestia, Trevor has got to be one of my most favorite characters in all the games I've ever played. And trust me, that is one hell of a lot of games. :raritywink:

And meanwhile, at the time, somewhere else in the world, Twilight Sparkle just spilled hot coffee on one of her notebooks.

You know what else is a Disappearing Act? The updates for this story!

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THEY TOOK TREVOR!
:rainbowlaugh:

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Twilight: God damn stupid damn coffee

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Abandoned by APonyTypewriter.

The with next 2020 music off the Story

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