Blue Cord Dragoon
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Consider this tracked. Loving the story so far, almost no grammatical errors and every-pony's in character. Keep up the good work!
This is a fun little story. You could stand to make each chapter a little longer, but things are shaping up pretty fun.
Not bad. Not bad at all.
Oh boy, this is not going to end well. Heheh
Me Likey!
Great chapter, glad to see this finally updated. I feel like the thing that Applejack and Rainbow Dash both have is something that I should be able to guess, but I really have no idea
Do I even want to know what is in their bedroom drawers?
glad this story finally updated. i was looking forward to reading more about this aggressive love triangle
I'm half expecting some incredible plot twist that leaves Rarity chasing someone else. Although it is fantastic either way
Please update more! Once a month isn't nearly enough, and this is really good stuff!
By God, this is gold. The lovelorn Applejack and the way you described her had such an immense impact on me that no other Rarijack fanfic was able to effect me in the same way and I promise you I've read them all.
I can't wait to read more from you.
Oh, Rarity
That was really sad, although I know whom im rooting for, I can't wait to see what you got in store.
Woah!
Nice! Aj and Dash have a Frekin Cat-Fight!
I was Expecting one of them to collapse after a while and i predict things are gonna get worse for Dash later on 
, while they might not get as worse for Aj.
But still this was my reaction through out the chapter:
Dash and Rarity Kissing
Aj ruining the moment
Rainbow getting pissed at Aj:
Aj and Dash's cat fight:
Aj and Dash seeing Rarity in shock and horror:
Rarity crying and Aj and Dash Leaving:
The end of the chapter:
I want to thank everyone for following the story and keeping up with it so far despite the irregular and lengthy waits for updates. Your support means so much to me because it feels very refreshing to know that I'm not just writing for myself. Again, thank you
With that said, I have three announcements to make:
First, I will be away for the next two weeks and it will be highly unlikely that I will be able to update the story during that time. However, while I'm away, I going to finish up the entire story and all remaining chapters will be posted by the last week of June.
Second, while I'm away, I will try my hoof at starting a few more stories that I've been thinking of. I will just start the first few chapters of each and let my readership decide on which they would like me to finish first via comment feedback.
And lastly, if your going to be attending BronyCon, look for me there! I hope to attend the fanfiction panel (just as a layman, not as a panelist) and will be all over the convention, so if you want to meet me and pick my brain just find me during the weekend!
Once more, thank you for your support and feedback, it means the world to me and I hope I get the chance to suprise with more in the near future.
Sincerely
Blue Cord Dragoon
I never thought I would want to punch Scootaloo or Applebloom before
As disappointed that I am that Rarity didn't pick one, I have to say that this ended nicely. Bravo.
Well, this was indeed the only way it could have gone. Nice
"I suppose that I could turn you into cupcakes, but that wouldn’t be very nice of me"
The tension is so thick you could build a tank with it.
I wasn't expecting a fight
This story is awesome.
Keep writing my friend
Scootaloo and Applebloom hurting Sweetie Belle?
Guess who just won an all-inclusive, free trip to the sun.
I really think it should be “ya’ll” when the word is emphasized. You can’t really emphasize “ya”.
*coincidental
Although it’s up to you whether Rarity would know that.
Booo. Take your Rarijack and shove it. Whatever else may have happened, RD confessed first, and Rarity accepted. The shop was destroyed because AJ couldn’t just let Rarity be happy. Also, not for nothing, but RD did no less than save Rarity’s life after the unicorn had behaved awfully. I don’t think the sleepover anecdote speaks as highly of AJ. What, she humbled herself enough to ask for help solving a problem she created from whole cloth? How very impressive… not.
This ending is masochistic. Is Rarity going to deny herself love forever so her friends don’t get jealous? If RD and AJ can get over her without either being happy, they can get over her with one of them being happy.