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I like it so far keep up good work.
yay! it was so worth it to put it in a book shelf. and even more worth it just to read it.
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Thanks guys, I was pretty scared whether or not to publish the first chapter because I thought it was a bit shit, but I thought I might as well see what people think.
5314164 I'm not surprised that you would think that because there is a lot of people that hate HIE's but as long as you know someone is still reading you should make more for example have you heard of The Sisters Revolution? if not have a look and look at the comments. you will be surprised.
lastly for replying to the readers comments you get random pony song: The Blob Symphony [Original]
Well that was fun. My favourite part was the Glock gun scene. Oh wait? There wasn't one *Kevin Rudd laugh*. I did like the Tony bobble head. My only gripe was where would you find an AK in Australia? All the other firearms I can rationalise, even the M14 you might be able to get from Darwin (even though the Marines use the M39,I'll let it fly). But did the Ruskies come bearing gifts?
Apart from that I like the post apocalyptic setting. In Australia, even better.
P. S. Sig sauer handguns are my masturbation material. Just through I'd declare that conflict of interest.
5319552 I had a sort of back story to all their weapons and he found his in a slaver base when they where much younger. I plan to write about it and come up with something alot more in-depth then just 'he found it'
5320054 i seem to recall the aussie military using Steyr AUGs,
that would make a bit more sense, or some other rifle that uses NATO ammunition, rather than the much rarer (in Australia) 7.62x39.
Regarding all the deleted comments, it was just a bunch of back and forth between me and another user called Of Da Hooks about story stuff.
This is great.
Good work again LPC.
5885673 Thanks Sim Stat!
As a gas mask collector, this irks me. First off, filters, not gas canisters. If they were gas canisters, the mask would do the opposite of what it should. Second, there is no "mouth" of a gas mask. Oh, and are all of the masks "double cheek loaders"? (2 filters) If so, that would be somewhat illogical, given their situation. The better choice would be a center mounted filter, hose, or a "rifleman type" (single filter on one side, the side opposite to the shooter's shooting arm, in order to allow easier aiming with rifle-grip weapons). Sorry for the meaningless comment, or sounding condescending. Good story either way.
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Thanks for the heads up, in actuality I've never owned a gas mask since military hardware is pretty hard to come by in Australia so I'm guessing what the proper terminology would be for this kinda stuff. Anything else that's obviously wrong or is that all?
5892621 Nothing else is out of place, really.
5893341 Cool, I got something somewhat right
So the four of them end up in different places. Interesting...
Since when the fuck did Canada have the balls? They rarely get pissed. You should know you've fucked up if Canada is pissed at you enough to attack you.
5975158 Trust me, Canada has EVERY RIGHT to be pissed off
So, split up four ways. I have a feeling they'll all meet in Ponyville again.
So patches got the everfree right? Welp, i feel sorry for the local food chain, 'cause there's a new predator in town.
Loving the story, keep it up because you can do it!
6135240 Thanks man. I plan to get back to writing this soon since I've got a lot more free time and motivation. I'm gonna dedicate whole chapters to one character for awhile just to get the individual plots rolling.
Yes! Update! Onwards, my dear author!
6515207 Nothing can stop the slow burn of LPC!
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Huzzah!
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Australia: Hey, Canada
Canada: what is it, Australia sempai?
Australia: *leans in closely* Maple Syrup Tax
Canada: Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Australia: trollolololololololololol
And that's how Equestria was made
Glory for the Australian Empire, all hail our updates, insert propaganda here!
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You've learnt much in your short time here, young Cow.
Awesome update! Onward!
6677129 thanks!
Is the rabbit a five nights at Freddy's reference