• Member Since 3rd Oct, 2013
  • offline last seen Nov 14th, 2022

King Sombra11


Why hello there!

T

Long ago Princess Luna managed to contain King Sombra in the icy tundra of the north. But he is awake and seeking vengeance. Princess Celestia wants him destroyed, Twilight thinks he can be redeemed and Luna is torn between what used to be her lover now transformed into a corrupted Tyrant hell bent on dominating the land.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 25 )

King Sombra is my favourite villain. Nice story, man :twilightsmile:

3323926 thanks I have read one of your stories and I was quite surprised when you favourited my story as I recognised your name. I have got to say though your stories are ace! :pinkiehappy:

3323975 Thanks a lot! My friends say they are terribly mediocre, so that means a lot :rainbowkiss:

:pinkiehappy: YES Bro good job keep it up

I'm surprised by all the fanfic this guy's gotten, Sombra was really one-dimensional in the show. Then again, perhaps that's exactly why; wishful thinking and curiosity has caused fans to want some sort of backstory for the creation of such an utterly cruel villain.

3337313 Exactly lots of fans felt he has been neglected so we decided to do Sombra a favour and give him some spotlight in the world of fanfic

I love this way too much. Like... waaaaaaaaaaay too much :pinkiesad2:

Decent world building so far, keep it up.

3354832 why thank you I shall try my very best

Your story's shorthand premise is eerily similar to mine :rainbowlaugh:
I am going to browse through this when I get the chance. Lovely idea, mate.

3667335 Why he died !! is soo sad!!

I'm sorry to say that this looked interesting at first, but when I began reading I quickly found myself bored and skipping over dialogue that wasn't sombra's. Sorry, it just didn't grab my attention:facehoof:

Love it!!! Truly I like shipping Luna and Sombra >_<

3337313
just like the background ponies

:applecry::fluttercry::fluttershysad::raritycry: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Sombra died!!!!!!!!!

4878005 I could not resist. I had to kill somepony after all.

As a Luna/Sombra Fan I enjoyed it, :pinkiehappy: it has a good background and a good Story. :raritystarry:
I am kind of trying to write my own Luna/Sombra fanfiction, there is going three Stories, the first one is almost finished, it is call Purity and Corrupt, it is only got one more chapter left. the only problem is that I can write good dialogue just not good background.

this looks pretty good...... I love luna x somber ships

:yay: (yay)

im bored..... sorry i liked it at first but this is just not my style i guess..:applecry::applejackunsure::fluttercry::facehoof:

Eny

Great work :yay:

Login or register to comment