Alternate ending to "Mistress Do Well." Her dream crushed and spirit broken, Rainbow Dash disappears from Ponyville without a trace, leaving Twilight and the others behind with the unspeakable atrocities they put her through.
Inb4 you planned for these to last until late November. So happy you didn't stick to your schedule, though. I hate waiting for new installments of stories I like.
This is really good, the best sequel to a story I might add (in my opinion) well.. Except for rocket to insanity.. Anyways my point is keep going, I love to see what you have instore. -Brony4life14
Well it looks like bad news for the remaining Mane Six, excluding Dash of course. But why did Luna help Dash get Freddy Kruger on Rarity's flank? If that is what Luna calls justice. I hate to see her do punishment. Probably make the Punisher want to cry in shame. Actually I think Luna made Freddy Kruger cry in shame. The worst he has ever done was slam a girl's head through a TV and killed her.
Again having to agree with WithRegardsTo in how the last chapter and this one tie in together.
I can't wait for the next chapter already. How do you manage to keep writing such amazing work that I constantly refresh my browser throughout the day hoping to see another chapter or story from you?
Please continue gracing us with excellent storytelling and character depth. I will continue my watching and favoring for your works.
I do not see a derpy pony. I see Derpy, a pony. One day I will figure out how to get a sig on Fimfiction.
Somehow seems unlikely that they could gather all 4 ponies, file all necessary paperwork, and begin legal proceedings within the next 11 minutes. So, if she can't press charges... what does she want?
Rainbow should go easy on Twilight. Twilight stayed in Ponyville for the whole year waiting to see if Rainbow came back. She wants to help Rainbow in any way she can. She had no complaints about Rainbow practically raping her. AND she made Rainbow a sandwich.
"Rainbow? Are you okay?" she heard Twilight ask, the alicorn sitting up next to her.
Hooray! Way to go! Woo-Hoo!
The prosecutor was only taken a back for a moment at Rainbow's aggressive forwardness.
"Aback" is one word. Luna, using her creepy Inception powers, helped Rainbow Dash murder Rarity in her dream. No matter what the reason, not even in the case of kidnapping, torture, and rape; murder is never justified. However, since Rarity died in her coma, and Twilight was the one who put her there, technically, Twilight is responsible for Rarity's death. Therefore, Twilight is also a murderer.
High above the royal city of Canterlot, in the castle's tallest tower, Princess Luna began to slowly ease out of her deep meditation. She breathed deep, then slowly let the air out, as she floated back to the here and now.
"Justice." she whispered to herself.
She got to her hooves, and began making preparations to set the moon to make way for her sister's sun in just over an hour's time.
Double feature with finale+epilogue in one fell swoop? Please?
Seriously, can't wait. I really wanna know what you're gonna do with this.
Stage one justice has been served.
Inb4 you planned for these to last until late November.
So happy you didn't stick to your schedule, though. I hate waiting for new installments of stories I like.
I renounce what I said last chapter, about being uncertain. The last chapter, tied in with this one, were both excellent.
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And I'm still going to read the Cupcake Chronicles... just turned out I wasn't ready yet. But i'll get there.
This is really good, the best sequel to a story I might add (in my opinion) well.. Except for rocket to insanity.. Anyways my point is keep going, I love to see what you have instore.
-Brony4life14
Justice
Best chapter yet keep it up
Well it looks like bad news for the remaining Mane Six, excluding Dash of course. But why did Luna help Dash get Freddy Kruger on Rarity's flank? If that is what Luna calls justice. I hate to see her do punishment. Probably make the Punisher want to cry in shame. Actually I think Luna made Freddy Kruger cry in shame. The worst he has ever done was slam a girl's head through a TV and killed her.
Again having to agree with WithRegardsTo in how the last chapter and this one tie in together.
I can't wait for the next chapter already. How do you manage to keep writing such amazing work that I constantly refresh my browser throughout the day hoping to see another chapter or story from you?
Please continue gracing us with excellent storytelling and character depth.
I will continue my watching and favoring for your works.
I do not see a derpy pony.
I see Derpy, a pony.
One day I will figure out how to get a sig on Fimfiction.
Somehow seems unlikely that they could gather all 4 ponies, file all necessary paperwork, and begin legal proceedings within the next 11 minutes.
So, if she can't press charges... what does she want?
Rainbow should go easy on Twilight.
Twilight stayed in Ponyville for the whole year waiting to see if Rainbow came back.
She wants to help Rainbow in any way she can.
She had no complaints about Rainbow practically raping her.
AND she made Rainbow a sandwich.
Hooray! Way to go! Woo-Hoo!
"Aback" is one word.
Luna, using her creepy Inception powers, helped Rainbow Dash murder Rarity in her dream. No matter what the reason, not even in the case of kidnapping, torture, and rape; murder is never justified. However, since Rarity died in her coma, and Twilight was the one who put her there, technically, Twilight is responsible for Rarity's death. Therefore, Twilight is also a murderer.
3378391 She's a mare.
Mares love makin' sammiches.
(inb4 "that's sexist!" comments)
3378668 I think I want to wait until the story is over before replying to this. Because you do have a point, but I don't want to spoil anything.
3378366 dudududududududud its magic
connect to above dialog.
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Luna is still best Princess. What with what she pulled (as revealed in later stories).
Is it bad that I laughed at this?
6234613 Nope, I laughed as well.
I was a bit disappointed that it was so fast (Giggity) but then again my way of punishment is more permanent.
Let's see what Rainbow's going to decide...