A short story writer I guess... I will need to adapt to pony characters....
A young Earth Pony named Tread is wounded in the front lines and suddenly thrust back into civilian life after being commemorated by the Princess herself. Finding himself in Ponyville after being convinced to move there by the Princess, How will the 15 year old adapt to life?
World War 1 like setting..
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"My voice ans wavering" - not sure what is meant to be so I thought I should point it out.
281412 Yea, I was a little confused at that too.
iron horse
pony iron cross maybe?
>> maybe was but that is what i think
281969 Thanks. I was unsure but I like that WAY better.
281969 Thanks. I was unsure but I like that WAY better.281412 thanks for catching that!
this oughtta be interesting...
Finally! A short, interesting fanfic! I've been looking everywhere for one of these! Now, I have something to read on my YT channel (Whenever it is comlete). I'm glad today was the day I decided to go to the "Archive" section of Fimfiction. Cant wait till the ending!
(I actually haven't read it yet. It just seems interesting).
From,
JamesIsABrony
282754 Thanks! I hope you enjoy!
At the end all i saw was
thisiswhyimjason.com/wp-content/uploads/thisiswhyimjason.com/2010/07/game-over-420x338.jpg
i think that is about the moment where your brain goes:
F**k
Hey! Why the fuck are there no comments yet? I like the new chapter, but the gorey bit... Isn't
Actually very gorey....
KEEP THEM CHAPTERS A COMIN!
damn.........plot twist
NOOOOOOOO! Lonly comment boards ar not allowed!!!!
do i sence a
source of LOOOOOVVVVEEEE???????
oooohhhhh......kinky
-slapped-
WHAT THE HELL PINKIE!
380697 ... Which source lol.
such a nice story
i want more
but dont want to seem overwanting
644654 heh. Well when I was writing... I kinda deleted the third and final war story. I realized the next day while looking to upload it. I was not a happy kid.
Now I will truly miss Tread. I enjoyed writing the stories during my classes at school. But finals are getting closer and I saw the end of the story. I do have a new challenge for my self. You should see it pop up when I get back.
Somehow he seems to be a war veteran or something like that.
Lucky colt, having 6 mares like him.
670164 Well the war DID end, so technically he is one.
Ending duh fuck happened I mean it went from a insane 7 mare likes 1colt to like a futility thing I guess I think you might want to add something to clear that up and btw I was thinking if I had the time th make a sort of sequel that clear up the missing chunk don't worry secret love problems will appear in it if I make it all credits go to you of course
924946 I'll probably write a sequal sometime after I continue work on my current story.
The last line
"Sarcasm mode activated"
Sureeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
looks promising/relevent to my interests, I shall give this a favorite/like and see where it takes me
I like the concept, but you seriously need to work on continuity. Like badly.
very all quiet on the western front