When Dusk Shine tries out a newly-revised teleportation spell, which he created with the aid of a book written by Swirly Star the Wise, it performs perfectly. Well, almost.
Trapped in a world where the Lords are Princesses and mare outnumber stallions four to one, he'll have to find a way back home before he is abducted by panting females who are just waiting to get him in their beds. To get home he must escape.... THE HEAT!
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This is a one-shot story which is basically about Dusk Shine, the rule 63 of Twilight Sparkle, getting trapped in the 'normal' universe while all the mares of Equestria are in heat. Not to mention he is also an alicorn, but he hasn't been one for long.
Note: There is no intimacy in this story. At all.
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This somewhat like the Twilight version?
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I wasn't aware there was a Twilight one.
I should probably add a disclaimer saying that I am unaware of any other stories that go by the same title.
i wish there were less one shots of themes like this
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If you did not like the story, why did you read it? And, more curiously, why even comment?
So THIS is why all the main characters in mlp are mares.
everything makes sense now. I have found the Middle Way. I am Buddha.
okay, maybe not.
I really loud this. Think it is funny.
good job.
keep writing, bro. ( or sis)
3651510 i meant there LESS one shots and MORE full blown stories
sorry if mistyped that
great fic man
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Did Twilight go to Dusk's world then?
3651510 I think s/h/it meant that s/h/it liked the story, but didn't like that it was a one-shot.
I'm pretty sure those female Royal Guards know not to come on to alicorn Royals like that less they risked their job, heat or no heat.
And hey at least dusk somewhat lucked out here I just have to wait till she is too frazzled.with flattering words to pay attention and then teleport back to your dimension
there should be a meme with a ragged ending, captions or an arrow with the words "to be continued" :)
And it was at that time, Dusk knew he darn messed up
The virginities of all the stallions may rest in peace