Thurman Robertson is a guy who had to live with his crazed drunken father and his depressed mother. He tries to save his sister and ends up in Equestria with her.
Will he ever get back? Will he stay? How will he go about it?
Rated 'Teen' for mild gore and violence. Well, mild most of the time... :P
It's pretty good, but don't you mean "Canterlot" instead of "Equestria" since Equestria is the country and Canterlot is a city in Equestria.
3255887 Crud! Did I really do that?
I did... Damn it! I'll fix that right up. I'm not too good with remembering the difference between those two... :S
EDIT: Aaaand, fixed...
3255923 That's why I'm here :p
*smacks your head* Nope, you needed me.
Yes, but ow.... you didn't have to hit me that hard Nightmare >_<
I shall be seeing where this goes!
3257828 Cool.
"You may prove useful in my plans, mortal." :P
3257844 Thanks! I'm just really surprised how popular this got compared to my older stories... Again, thx!
-SamMaherGamer
3258534 That's more Sombra's thing, besides, he's passed the whole "slave" stage.
3258651 Hehe, yeah...
Great chapter!
3319982 Thx, Setablaze! I am really overwhelmed on all of the feedback I've been getting as of late. If you were to look at my previous stories, they'd have more dislikes that likes!
Again, thx!
Oh, and by the way; I'm thinking of posting yet another chapter tonight. I'll see how I feel though. :S
(All that needs to be said.)