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It sounds forced, I mean, even with an honesty policy, he should at least have omitted or said less, it has also been said that he was a soldier, at least he would have tried to withhold information unless asked, but basically he throws everything away, well maybe I'm being unfair, it just doesn't seem like an acceptable tactic to sing everything you know in a potentially hostile setting.

Anyway, I'm just being a whim hahahaha, I'll keep reading, because despite what I don't like or think is wrong, I still like the story so far

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Not going to lie I read many h.i.e story but this one really breaks the mold in a good way mind you the hole story sorin been a female with added features was a interesting take on said character and the human been trans i never head a story that involves this topic its really got me interested were this story will go ( oh and my pervert side I love the clops seens up till now I never read any thing close like it and I love hehehe guse thats what happens when your bi ) keep up the amazing work