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My independant study found that this story reduces high blood pressure, therefore this story has the "Doctor Derpin Seal of Approval."
Good story. Write more
Gas that makes you go unconcious and several mysterious ponies... Not sure if trip to Sierra Madre or just Punga fruit...
347276 You never know, i could change the story at any time
This is a great and fantastic Fan Fiction I cant for more
I await eagerly for more.
Looks really awesome. I can't wait to see more
BREAKING THE FOURTH WALL!!!! Pinkie said not to tell the readers about the Pie-apault.
Also, Great job. Awaiting chapter three.
obligatory spelling error point-out:
"we were expecting you to get her"
also
"She looked for a way out of the gas but found none."
up?
Great start none the less
more spelling and grammar stuffs:
"It’s alright Pinks, were just lost,"
"mine still had some treats in mine with"
"into contents into her mouth."
"out another, thankfully untainted, cupcakes"
Just for reference, I'm not trying to complain, I just figure that this might save you some editing time if you ever bothered
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Thanks for that; I realize my grammar is teh suckz. And im currently looking for an editor that fixes grammar rather than the concepts in the story.
YAY! I can't wait for chapter 3! C'mon, gimme MOAR!!
Wait, this story is over? That's sad.
Oh well, It was good and I hope you write more stories like this one.
Now i am very confused?
What is this I don't even
