Astartes is a young ninja on the run from his clan. After coming to terms with his current life, superhuman powers and all, he attempts to take it only to be ported to the land of Equestria. How will he cope with his new life surrounded by ponies?
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awesome you used the race and apple idea me guesta
3237147 I did and I enjoyed writing it. This chapter was longer than I anticipated. I'm not used to writing such long chapters.
I tried giving this a shot but i can honestly say without exxageration that this story in in the bottom quarter of storys i have read
3237836 It's not everyone's cup of tea. I'm sorry I can't keep you entertained. Hopefully something else on site can be more to your taste.
3238493 I think I got the hand of this in my later chapters. I can't remember mucking up like that any other time, But thank you pointing it out, I'll make the change
*sigh* I tried. I really tried even after that Chapter 2 fiasco, but I can't go on any longer. The mind reading, the super life span of the ponies, it really turned me off in this story. I'm out.
Though, I think I'll be keeping this in my read it later list, In case I plan to try to give this story a chance again.
Great job mate, it made me laugh so i count that as a good one :D