The Play Date
written by Blitzle
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I have no words on how un-understandable this story is......just......none. I guess keep up what ever your doing ......
while the clitoris does get wet her orgasmic juices don't actually come from her clit.
that is all
I like the premise, but the grammar was all over the place. It also seemed to end too quickly with not enough sex or backstory. There wasn't even a reference to teenage libido. And what teenager asks an adult to give them a bath?
It was hot, but could be better.
X/10
Story=9
Plot=8
Grammer=3
Speed=2
too fast