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10 ponies are whisked away to play a game of mystery, intrigue and cunning: The Mole!

In The Mole, 10 contestants face challenges to earn bits for the team...and possibly themselves. But there is a twist. One pony does not belong. This pony is The Mole! They work undercover to try and ensure the team gets the least amount of bits possible in the series of mental and physical challenges. Contestants have journals t keep track of who they think is The Mole and at the end of each episode, somepony has to be eliminated...And of course, through all of this, Derpy Hooves & Carrot Top will be providing hilarious commentary.

So who's The Mole? Can you discover who it is? Only one way to find out!
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Anything in italics is somepony's thoughts in the diary room, or their written thoughts in their journal.

There will be small hints throughout the story that will hint to the Mole's true identity. See if you can spoil them all! And, if you do work out the moles true identity, please do not leave it in the comments, as it might ruin it for other people. Feel free to message me with your ideas if you like, I like seeing what people might think :3

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 29 )

Game shows that i used to love and ponies? Not sure how well this is going to mix. Doesn't seem like pony gameshows would do well...

I remember that show,:derpyderp1: now this is a crossover I can get behind. Keep up the good work!

AAAAnnnnndddd.....:moustache::moustache::moustache:

YOU PULLED IT OFF:pinkiehappy:

"and I think this a friendship" is a friendship

Never even heard of the television show but the idea of it really hooked me. Throw in ponies and this could be awesome. :pinkiehappy: I love how you've interwoven them speaking to the camera or journal excerpts into the text. The first challenge was an interesting idea and so far it seems well written and entertaining. Definitely tracking. :twilightsmile:

Oh and I am totally guessing the mole is Bon-Bon. Even at this early stage she seems a little too eager to befriend Trixie. Add to that she wasn't very angry about Lyra's misdemeanours and she's immune in the first round. Just a guess. :scootangel:

Sounds interesting and has good reviews...
But doesn't sound like my "cup of tea"...
I guess I'll give it a chance.
:twilightsmile:

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Thank you! I hope to have weekly updates, so keep tracking!

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thank you for trying the story! This is my first aside from the competition entry!

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Woohooo! My first guess! I can't say anything about it, but the Mole is female...:coolphoto:

Either way, glad you enjoy it!

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Marvellous! I was hoping it would work :raritystarry:

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Thank you muchly! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

Bon-bon, the pony who's voice is different every time she speaks, is a voice actress? Seems legit.

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Eeyup. I heard the theory someplace else and I thought it would be a good as job as any for my favourite background pony :3

421367 Bon-Bon is your favorite! Lyra is mine!
From the words of Rarity, It. Is. ON!
But, whatever, Bon-Bon is cool too.

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I figured it might be Lyra. I mean, look at your Avatar. Lyr is tied with Carrot Top for 2nd best background pony. 'Beyond Her Garden' made me love Carrot Top. Gahh.

Besides, Bon-Bon/Lyra is my favourite Ship! :raritywink:

425227 technically my favorite shipping is Vinyl/Octavia.
Livingtombstone's "Octavia's Overture" and "Like a spinning record" made me like them even more.

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I never really shipped those two for some reason. :coolphoto:

427214 it could probably because the fannon for those two are basicly polar opposites. Classy chellist and Party-loving DJ

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I guess. I only have a few other ships, and only one of them involves the mane 6 in any way - Appledash. That stuff is cute. Like, I love it in a totally non sexual way.

The plot thickens! :raritystarry: Well, not really. :raritywink: I can't spot any clues at all to who it could be in this chapter. Rarity was quick to defend Twilight, perhaps she was earning some points in her books? :pinkiegasp: From that performance, it probably isn't Twilight. :twilightoops: I'm still keeping my money on Bon Bon though. :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: She doesn't seem to be actively helping much, then again only Twilight really got a chance to shine here. :unsuresweetie: Why couldn't any of them have an evil moustache?! :raritydespair:

I'm betting that we're going to see AJ or RD leave next. They're not exactly the smartest ponies. :ajbemused: Then again, Pinkie might just answer them all randomly. :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks for taking such an active interest. I love seeing speculation, especially when I know all the answers :yay: There are clues, however very subtle. :raritywink: At the end I plan to compile all of the clues that I used to hint to The Mole's identity...

Wait and see to discover who will leave. Obviously. :eeyup:

Oh, the quiz was on the mole. Now I feel like a foal. :facehoof: I honestly thought you'd bump off one of the mane 6 though. Background characters are more fun as you can make up details about them, as long as they aren't too far-fetched from the fanon. :twilightsmile:

Octavia! No! :raritycry: My favourite member of the line-up. :fluttercry:

Fluttershy passed, and she thought it was Bon-Bon, but we saw Bon-Bon's thoughts on this, so she's either it or very good at faking. :unsuresweetie: My gut still says Bon-Bon, so I'm sticking with that for now. :moustache:

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To be honest I did away with Octavia for 2 reasons:
A. I planned who would go long before I started writing. I always plan ahead for my stories :twistnerd:
B. And I found it difficult to write for her. The others felt more natural, to be honest.

Thanks for commenting again :ajsmug:

Either Lyra is the most incompetent pony in the world or she actually is the mole. I mean, she's messed up on two of the three tasks thus far. :ajbemused: I'm beginning to reconsider my guess on Bon Bon. This would have been a very easy task to sabotage, yet she didn't. I'm actually starting to lean towards Rarity. She could have purposefully misconstrued the miming. Hmmm... :trixieshiftright:

I think Trixie is most likely to be the mole so far.
She's being, un :trixieshiftright:trixie

It's been so long... I need my fix - I mean update.

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