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3202211
There are... no words...
Feelsacatatonicriffic seems close.
Wow... Just... Wow.
Ow that hurt straight to the feels. Great story though.
Aw, c'mon, that's just cruel. Well written, so you get my like, but cruel.
What is it with the sad Twilestia those last months?
It's amazing how they never followed through with their mutual feelings. heh Goes to show ya if you wait too long you're opportunity is gone.
I may not like Twidash, but i absolutely love Twilestia. I just about lost it at the hospital. I actually did after reading Twilight's letter, and now i'll be depressed the rest of the day, but the good kind of depressed though.
The fact that I KNEW it would end like that didn't help me prepare myself. That's all I'm saying.
Good job, you are making people cry. I hope you're happy. (I mean, you should... that was the intent of the story. You monster)
Such a sad story...I'm really in tears.
Just a great story., it gets 5/5 moustaches 
I haven't read this (not my kind of thing), but seeing that it's in the feature box, I just want to give you a little correction:
"Millennia" is plural of "millennium." Saying "a millennia" is incorrect. Just something you might want to fix; errors in the description are never good for business.
And here I was having a happy day today.
Time to drink.
Damnit the feels...
Well fuck.
...
Yeah, I think that about sums this up.
I was eating haribo hearts and drinking coke at the start. I was drinking tears and eating feels at the end. I must now go into the land of really shitty and cheap whiskey.
Can't say I'm even surprised with the amount I feel I get from this website even more...that'd be a lie
Dem feels
All dem feels
So many feels
This is why you don't wait for that mythical "best time ever" to come around. It never does, there are always reasons to put it off, and then you lose your chance. I speak from experience.
All my feels. You have them.
I... I don't... I can't tell if I like this story or hate it... This is definitely in my top ten of tragedy stories.
That... oh my god the ending... That was...
Wow.
Just really, really wow.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
MULE FUCKING FUNGUS SCUM SELF ELATED NIGGER TWAT. That is my reaction.
One of the best I have ever read.
"When should I tell her?" The answer is always the same: "Before now."
Beautifully done.
its okay, i didnt need to feel happy anyways
This is the first time in my Friking life that I want to get a beer and I have never once drinked one.
You Sir are a master this hurts in the core.
THAT ENDING... LIQUID PRIDE.
Overall, nicely done with fine characterization! Given the opening and the tags, the ending was far too predictable. Okay, if angst is what you came for, otherwise, it's one of those saw-it-a-mile-away closers. Speaking of tags, this definitely needs the Romance tag, twice over. If I'm in the mood for Twilestia, that'd be the first filter I picked.
Everything was expected; all the cards revealed to me before I even started... until that last part. I had a full house, only to be overcome by a royal flush of emotion. Damn you, sir-- you got me good.
3205431
Holy racism, Batman!
3203857 your story however, what was it? Forever is Forever? Made me bawl like a bitch. After reading it, I was confused. I knew AJ died but I didn't understand the last scene. Wasn't until the comments section did I realize, and cry like a little cunt.
This story however, is well written for what it has and the story is pretty damn good, especially with that last letter. But it just lacked, idk, detail? more? I guess I feel that there could have been a lot more to it. More like 20,000 words or more with good content would've made for a hell of a story. I guess I've grown hard and resist to these sad fics over the years... and I can't tell if that's a good thing or a bad thing. Am I used to it, or am I losing that touch. Oh well, good read anyway.
When I read, this came on
I cant even
*sigh*
The plot twists were predictable, and their delivery clipped and choppy. The writing was technically competent, but the fact is this was a mix of fairly common tropes with no catharsis and no point. Suffer suffer suffer. Bleh.
Misery is a part of the human experience, but a story that does nothing but soak in the suffering really lacks a point to me. Celestia will either emotionally break and move on or she will bear that emotional scar her whole eternal existence. Seeing people be irrevocably hurt is such a wonderful expereince. Woo.
The context suggests that "Twilight face" should be "Twilight's face".
I really would have liked to hear Celestia's backstory.
It seemed like the saddest part of the fic, and instead of being deep/ sensitive, it was explained with an authorial wave of the hand. Without it... well, it did seem like Celestia was acting like a schoolfilly, and the story, to me, lost its impact... until the end.
Then, I remembered that it's a tragedy, so the audience isn't really supposed to empathize with the main character too much and that character isn't supposed to learn from their mistakes. Afterwards, the ending will be a failure that they can learn from... or that a reader can.
After that, I liked and cried.
meh. so-so.
Okay. I enjoyed the story perhaps a bit too much, but that ending? That letter? You could hear my hearts shatter.
This story was...OK, but it felt so contrived to me, like the entire point of anything in the story was to be as sad as possible, not to simply tell a story and have sadness be an effect. Did I find it sad? Yes. Was that sadness in anyway satisfying? not at all. A good sadfic is...cathartic. The reader is sad, but at the same time the sadness felt organic and there was real meaning behind it. This was the literary equivalent of someone slowly drowning a bag of cats. Its undeniably sad, and in this case, well written, but all I can think about is why. Its the same way I feel about clopfics. I'm OK with clop if its integral to the story. Here, the sadness wasn't integral to the story, It was the story. As I said, it was well written so I wont downvote, but I wont upvote either.
oh dear
that ending 
Nice story, really sad, could be a nice slice of life IMHO.
the story is full of feels but whats worst is having to live through the first half and then looking back and realizing that has been you the past few months...that hurts the most
and then reading the last half i began to cry thinking that that could happen to me so if you'll excuse me i have to go find someone and ask them something.
This story was calculated to hit people in the feels.
Sadly, it missed. Why?
The real failing, I think, is that Luna and Celestia did not feel very in character in the story. Their words were not their own on several occasions, and that pulled from the core of the story.
And so, cowardice is one of worst sins.
3202729
The fandom is getting anxious without new episodes, and it reflects in the art we produce.
Oh noes, poor Celestia.
If she had just been a little braver...
I generally try to keep a professional facade when writing comments for fics. However, I think I'll make an exception.
GOD DAMN MAN WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THIS TEAR JERKING PONY STORY THAT GENERATES THE SALTY LIQUID OF PAIN AND SORROW FROM MY VERY EYE HOLES!!!!!!!!
It's rather good though, the pacing was amazing, the plot believable and generally interesting.
Keep it up.
Don't
Don't you dare 
Don't you dare let a single tear fall 
Nonononononononono
That should be "A minute"
But all in all I think the story skipped around too much. I mean one minute twilight is well the next she's in surgery then she dies... Happens too quick but the story is pretty original and had an amazingly outstanding ending. Great work Eselle. Keep it up
I enjoyed it.
*stab*
R...right in the feels!