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Gabriel LaVedier


Just another University-edicated fanfiction writer who prefers the cheers and laughter of ponies to madness and sorrow.

Comments ( 28 )

baise-mon-cul

What does that mean?

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It's Elizabethan-era French (Actually, it's still more-or-less proper French) for "Kiss-my-ass." It was used as an anti-French insult in the play "The Shoemaker's Holiday" and may have been a common one (there's a lot of anti-French rancor even today.) But here... kissing ass is a good thing.

3323503 I see..........(favorited)

my translator said baise-mon-cul means fuck-my-ass:derpytongue2:

You check with the mods and they're cool with it?

3323574

I had PlotPony remove the story from the anthology, which was what the Mods said would be required.

Comment posted by MrLucksman deleted Oct 10th, 2013

3325542

If that's a link to CCR's song then it was intentional, because I've always called the couple "BadMoon".

Hundred of. Hundreds of.

only polished. only a polished.

squeezes his hooves. squeezed his hooves.

3328944

No comment? Not much of a fan? I tried to make it classy clop.

3334603

It was alright, just not my thing.

3334603 that was really hot. can you make more chapters for each of the worship areas?

3719514

I wish I had the time to. I'd love to write up some hoof-worship, some teat-worship, maybe horn or wing worship (or both). This couple is just my favorite for so many reasons.

3719868 why not make the time then?

3719870

I literally don't have it. What time isn't taken up by my in-progress collaboration story is occupied by family, job hunting and moving.

3719955 do you think you will sometime?

3719975

I don't know. I have a lot on my plate right now.

I can't believe it took me so long to read this. So nice.
Also forgive my vulgarity but DAT ASS.

Two things:

So your an ass man I take it?

Is Luna pregnant?

4028905

I am to a degree. And she is... kind of. Using magic she halted the development but she is technically pregnant.

4038737

Aye, Sir Sauce, and it please you

i think it should say "An it please thee."

4172106
Bad Apple has gained "you" status, a state that includes, at present, only her sister and him. Thanks for the other correction though.

4173484 your welcome. i still think it should be thee, if only because of the way she speaks in show, and the fact that she is speaking formally, as it is a ritual. its just a quality thing. IMO, it detracts from the mental picture. there are some other grammatical and punctuation errors, but this is the most jarring.

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I understand what you're saying but there are two issues for me. First off, I like to maintain a connection to other stories, and keep Luna's We/Thee, I/Thee, I/You division clear. About the formality, you're right but Luna is very much in love, and it's not formal roleplaying. If you want to see formal roleplaying check out "Royal Hospitality" and "Kinky Sex Disasters".

4177983 check those out later.

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