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Hot daaaaaamn!
I think you mixed up the he/parts a few times, but that was still hawter than I expected
Yay
umm wow... that was pretty hot. this coming from someone WHO never posts on a pure clopfic... on a side note do a chapter where shining does this while in heat pretty sure he will have a fit from that
3172618 Fixed. Thanks for the heads up!
3172648 If enough people comment saying that they'd like to see more of this, I'd be more than happy to continue writing, but for now, I'm going to leave it as complete.
Good to see another story about myself
i think it would be a good idea to see more of this if you have time in the future
3172799 I hoped you liked the experience!
3172832Of course
I remember it fondly
Never have to different people/ponies talking in the same paragraph. You also used begging twice in one sentence in a different part.
Aside from that, nice. story.
3172967 Thanks for catching those!
Hot little clopfic!
. But this vanilla, happy ending is good too. 
I would have added a little twist at the end and made a few more chapters
3173104 I was thinking about it, but we'll see if I decide to turn this into a full-blown story. If enough people ask that I continue this, then I will!
3173135
Another idea for how this story could turn out: Something happens the following day and... >EDIT<
Nevermind. I don't want to unintentionally give away future plot points
3173152 I think you should know that this story is now incomplete...
3173158
My face right now, I'm so excited.
Side note, if you do want to use any of those ideas, feel more than free to delete those comments so as to not ruin the story for new readers.
3173163 I tend to avoid deleting comments, as it leaves a nasty looking gray bar across the screen. If I do use that idea, I'll just ask you to edit it to something else.
3173171
Splendid. Well, just let me know if that's ever the case.
Good luck on your story btw! Crossing my fingers that this will hit the feature box overnight!
3173185 Haha if it does, take a screenshot and send it to me! I'm heading to bed as it's pretty late here!
3173185 And also, if you want to help me hit the feature box (something that I've never done before) please feel free to spread my story around to your friends! I'd really appreciate it!
3173198
I really like this clopfic, and I'd love to share it with my friends, but I don't know any bronies in person. Thing is, I live in new zealand, and mlp doesn't air here (that sucks), we can't use netflix for some reason (really sucks) and it's hard to find any of the reallu good episodes on youtube for some reason. You have no idea what my point is, do you? :P
Definitely digging this fic +1 to keep it going good sir.
Well, alright-y then...
I love mutual TF stories like this one, so thank you kindly for this delicious little story.
3173185 Hey Twisted! And feature box hath been hit!
Yo Dawg, herd you liek groups!
3173152
Oh god, that has potential.
You're only allowed to use that phrase before you throw Scootaloo out the window.
3174960
Someone please write that.
3173402 Thanks, glad you like it!
3173706 You're welcome!
3174554 FINALLY!!! After publishing nearly 50k words, one of my stories finally gets featured! Ya'll don't know how happy I am right now!!
3174607 What, you have more?!?
3174692 Originally, the story was marked as Complete, but I'm going to continue the story along those lines.
3174960 Lol, poor scoots...
3175185 I second that motion.
shining getting pregnent would be interesting.
3176011 Shhh...
3173152 Oh you.
Congrats on getting featured. Heh, seems like Cadance and Shining Armor genderswaps getting featured is a bit of a trend. There's this one, mine (called Kinds of Love) and another one (I forget the name, it was anthro and just a R63 universe without transformation).
3176472 Thanks! And yeah, it does seem that Cadence and Shining genderswap stories are pretty popular nowadays, which is precisely why I wrote it.
3176491
What other Cadance and Shining Gender Swap stories are there?
I want to see Caddy accidentally get Shining preggers and he can't turn back until he conceives that'd be an interesting series of events. Not to mention how to explain that to the kid when they get older.
3177295
Off the top of my head, "Kinds of Love" is one of the big ones.
3174960
"So my daughter has some.... interesting claims regarding the activities you two were getting up to in the north tower. And your attempt to murder Scootaloo when she happened upon you. Fortunately, you picked the least effective way to kill a pegasus, since foals are born instinctively knowing how to fly."
3177295 Yeah, Kinds of Love is a great story and I highly recommend it. I know there's another one, but I can't remember what it was called.
3177295 Lol stop telling people the storyline!
3177499
Sure, but now you've earned a fave for updates. On a site like this, it's not so much what happens (because almost everything has been done) as how the author handles it.
3177401
Thank you. If you can think of any other good ones could you please PM me them?
3177492
This is my first one and so far it's amazing.
3177513 Exactly.
3177516 Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
He he, equal parts cute and sexy.
Wonder what's next? Shining-chan's first anal? Getting stuck as a mare? Maybe a spot of crazed nymphomania?
3177562 If you liked how this story was both cute and sexy, check out my other one, There is a First Time for Everything! As for what's next, you'll just have to wait and see!
"“Oh, we aren’t done yet…” A deep masculine voice suddenly rang out. "
*table flip*
I CALLED THAT SHIT!
"“But that’s gay!”"
ikr? and s/he isn't even braeburn!
great fic, I found many moments hilarious
3178369 Thanks, and be sure to stay tuned for more hilarious moments, as there will be many more!
Really liked this, brought back memories of "Kinds of Love", can't wait for more chapters.
Btw, you planning on keeping it mostly R63 m/f or are you gonna explore a bit more of other pairings aswell?
3178385
And thus how Shining got Pregnant....
Please more
is it bad that i want shining to be the one who gets pregnant in the end and has to end up staying a mare for as long as her body is lactating?