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The Sham I am.

If your appearance marked you as an untrustworthy, greedy, selfish pony and noone wanted to even try and be your friend, what would you do with your life? Sometimes you just have to start over and hope that you can pull it off.

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Setting up with a smile. · 7th Sep 2013 · 1,649 words
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It all comes out in the wash. · 7th Sep 2013 · 1,882 words
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Keradon

Keradon #1 · Sep 7th, 2013 · · · It all comes out in the wash. ·

Seems a tad scrambled (the whole medical condition thing didn't really leap out at me). And Sudden Twilight is sudden. But all in all pretty good.

TehAussieGriffin

TehAussieGriffin #2 · Jun 4th, 2014 · · · It all comes out in the wash. ·

3168785 Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, my loose rule of making all my chapters two pages (using size 11 Arial font) tends to constrict the time I have to ramp up drama or introduce elements gradually, yet I hadn't thought of how to show a magically animated limb subtly effecting her movements. I also deigned to have Twilight be sudden because that's how life's unexpected tragedies happen.
A.G .

Templar22

Templar22 #3 · Aug 4th, 2014 · · · It all comes out in the wash. ·

I enjoyed it, kinda wish there was more though.

TehAussieGriffin

TehAussieGriffin #4 · Aug 9th, 2014 · · · It all comes out in the wash. ·

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Well, that's a compliment and a half! ^,^
Still, I wanted to make the story short (two pages per chapter) and there isn't a lot left after Sham becoming a hum-drum resident of Ponyville, though you could help me proof-read a Knight Rider / MLP cross-over story I haven't published yet. (Srsly, I need a 2nd set of eyes on this. -.-)
A.G.

Orbiting Kettle

Orbiting Kettle #5 · Jan 26th, 2015 · · · It all comes out in the wash. ·

I really like the concept, but the story deserves more room to develop. Working with constrains is good (you know I should probably impose some more constrains on myself) but here you have something that can blossom with a little work.

TehAussieGriffin

TehAussieGriffin #6 · Jan 26th, 2015 · · · It all comes out in the wash. ·

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You know you're not the only one to say that. It's not that I get bored of the story, it's just that I like to cut it down to the least words possible to convey the meaning, sentiment and plot. Perhaps I do lose something in the effort.
A.G.