Sunset Shimmer returns to Equestria only to not receive what she thought she'd
get.
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I like it. Hope Sunset is well recieved in Equestria.
I think you need a proofreader but I´m not the guy for that job. Ask around and someone will point you to an editor.
i really like where this is going! keep it up!
fast pace...very much so. not many details. seems mostly like a filler. no real point to it other than her going back to equestria and theres no goal to the story as far as i can hear.
Very fine story there pardner! I will be keepin' a eye out. I left some graditude for yah' and it is looking like I'm your first follower stranger!
3169963 yeah I do know it was rushed but I do believe that I told you that I was writing as I was typing.
3171937 ok...and? i have an ulcer on my eye and can only read with a black background. pure white will make my eyes burn..hurt. i can't read author's notes. they don't change colors.
anyways. still. i say rewrite it and think it over. you have a sound idea. sunset comming back but you need more thought on it to be a great story. otherwise it'll just be another one, maybe two shot, in a sea of dull fanfics that is the dry season of pony
Here, I thought we'd see Sunset Shimmer would have friends right after the events of Equestria Girls. I guess earning someone's trust just takes time.
Shopping's a nice opportunity to let it all out.
Could use a little rewrite, but on the whole, it's so cool!
Need I say that Sunset will need all the courage and support her new friends will give her.
Pinkie, you're almost useless...
It seems so sad to say goodbye...
Here's wishing Sunset the best of luck.
What's Hiatus?
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It means it won't be updated until further notice.
I believe it is safe to call this story dead.
Rest in peace not completed story.