Hey I like your story so far it's good, but I'm a little confused you said the books were at the post office but here (Snips and Spike walked out of the library to see the colt leaving.) your saying they're leaving the library. Did you mean to put it or was it a mistake. I'm just trying to help I'm writing my own book and I miss a lot of stuff. Just thought I would ask. I'm not trying to be mean.
Hey I like your story so far it's good, but I'm a little confused you said the books were at the post office but here (Snips and Spike walked out of the library to see the colt leaving.) your saying they're leaving the library. Did you mean to put it or was it a mistake. I'm just trying to help I'm writing my own book and I miss a lot of stuff. Just thought I would ask. I'm not trying to be mean.
Poor Snails