You had a nice portrayal of a first school crush going on in the beginning. Sudden, encompassing, and giddy. Especially because it's right after Twist got her cutie mark, which is usually considered "puberty" for Ponies and the extra hormonal thoughts will mix it up.
The dark tag though worries me. I'm not sure if it's going to relate to Twist's actions (which would ruin it for me) or Tiara's actions.
Why not put it up? Spike has to be paired with EVERY MARE, or filly in this case.
NO PONY IS NO LIMITS!
That being said, I like the idea of this story. Nerdy girl obsessed with the first male is nice to her. I can see this taking a creepy stalker turn later. Should be fun!
“Oh no, my glasses! My glasses! I can’t see anything without my glasses.”
said Twist as he/she/it walked straight into a blast furnace much to the celebratory cheers of all Ponyville....nay...all of Equestria. It was a joyous day, as one of Equestria's most irritating and useless ponies, one who even rivaled the likes of Scrappy Doo despite his/her/its exceptionally sparse screentime, had rejoined his/her/its freakishly androgynous ashes with the Universe...
Twist's infuriating lisp and purposelessly "nerdy" rehashing of Velma from Scooby Doo would plague the whole of equinity no more. Parties commenced, and urbody got crunk.
This story is captivating.
I like it!
I have been waiting on someone who puts a Spike x Twist shipping.
*Sees a Twist shipping fic*
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You should never be afraid to post what you write I know i at least will enjoy it
Nice Scooby doo reference when pepper's glasses fall of, or am I completely missing the point.....
You had a nice portrayal of a first school crush going on in the beginning. Sudden, encompassing, and giddy. Especially because it's right after Twist got her cutie mark, which is usually considered "puberty" for Ponies and the extra hormonal thoughts will mix it up.
The dark tag though worries me. I'm not sure if it's going to relate to Twist's actions (which would ruin it for me) or Tiara's actions.
Only one way to find out.
To the next chapter!
It's good enough so far that I am faving and giving it an upvote
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DAT OLDSCHOOL ADORKABLE TWILIGHT
Why not put it up? Spike has to be paired with EVERY MARE, or filly in this case.
NO PONY IS NO LIMITS!
That being said, I like the idea of this story. Nerdy girl obsessed with the first male is nice to her. I can see this taking a creepy stalker turn later. Should be fun!
Liking it so far
said Twist as he/she/it walked straight into a blast furnace much to the celebratory cheers of all Ponyville....nay...all of Equestria. It was a joyous day, as one of Equestria's most irritating and useless ponies, one who even rivaled the likes of Scrappy Doo despite his/her/its exceptionally sparse screentime, had rejoined his/her/its freakishly androgynous ashes with the Universe...
Twist's infuriating lisp and purposelessly "nerdy" rehashing of Velma from Scooby Doo would plague the whole of equinity no more. Parties commenced, and urbody got crunk.
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I actually like Twist. She's a cool pony.
3157718 its good but i was hoping for femdom rape
5574108 BEST FILLY zOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111