Something has happened to Equestria. Once a land of love and tolerance, it has been reduced to violence and tyranny.
Twilight Sparkle is the only pony who can remember how the world used to be. Even her former friends can't recall the time they spent together. All they know is distrust and hate.
And so Twilight began to spread her tale, in hopes that somepony would be reminded of the way things used to be. Unfortunately, her claims prove to be a threat to the existing social structures, and she attracts the attention of her former mentor.
I'm aware the story seems incomplete. I have no intention of continuing it at the moment.
A crossover with Homestuck: www.mspaintadventures.com. Knowledge of Homestuck is not required to enjoy the story, but such knowledge does help to explain a bit about what happened to Equestria.
LibreOffice must use a different tool for wordcount, because the document of my computer is exactly 5000 words.
Oh my god this is so cool. I'm a pretty big Homestuck fan, and this was perfect! Definitely intriguing enough that I would've read a a multi-chaptered story if there were one, but I love me some forbidding, cliff-hanger endings, so I enjoyed it the length it was.
I especially like how Twi's ancestor/descendant is Clover. That's pretty clever. I shall now spend the rest of my day dreaming up tales for this particular crossover.
This has filled at least one bucket.
Ok... Am I the only one who feels that this isn't finished?
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Then I suggest you check out my other story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/16270/The-Most-Dangerous-Game
Brilliantly executed. Poor Twilight. I can't blame her for being unable to accept that Celestia would forever be the heinous sun witch, but she could've at least escaped her execution...
In any case, I clearly have another story to read in The Most Dangerous Game. Thank you for this, and in advance for that.
Your description needs an http:// after the url= 8it.
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Awesome! Thanks. I was wondering why it wasn't working.
F8v'd just in c8se it ever upd8tes. I'm sad that universe 2 doesn't get a story while universe 1 does.
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I probably won't update The Scratch. I'd prefer to let this stand alone and work other ideas into The Most Dangerous Game, but you never know.
3590755 Now that I've actually read The Most D8ngerous G8me, I'm not so sure that these two stories can even coexist in the s8me timeline type thingy, since TS isn't a hero of 8lood.
That was really cool. I don't know what it has to do with Homestuck (never read it, myself), but I like it for what it is. :D
"I am angry, because I forgive you."
"I thought I could change you."
"I was a fool."
You know, I can't believe all this time I didn't even think of using the 6 founding ponies in the HWE play as the dancestors for the Mane 6 in Homestuck crossovers.
Great read. Really got the gears turning in my head.
Someone who suspected that to be true is a person I would describe as a sucker.
Haa haa.
Hee hee.
Hoo hoo.