• Member Since 20th Oct, 2014
  • offline last seen Dec 30th, 2015

DjDashie


I love the series. Ever since the show began I have felt the need to mix the musical arts of the show in with my own music. The time's come for me to do just that.

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EHC

Please, continue.
I just want to see them happy now. That'll probably be a few chapters later, but still: any story that makes a reader care for the characters is a good story.

hmmm. i am intrigued. very good thus far.

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Glad you guys are liking it so far :twilightsmile:

Soooooo, Whens the HiE story comeing?

Niiice. We can feel every character from the show, without even reading there name.

Also, the song and the little picture were a nice touch.

This is great and i can't wait for the next chapter.

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Glad to hear :twilightsmile: Promise it won't be too long from now!

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I'm actually working on one right now. It's a little hard for me since I haven't really associated with HiE fics before, but I'm trying :twilightsheepish: Promise it won't be too long from now

3227100 If you need help with it ask me I've read a lot of HiE's. And put azena in it that would be epic

Uhm... I think in the show they mention that Angel is male. Also you seemed to have switched up Angel's gender yourself in the story. During everything at Fluttershy's place Angel is referred to as female but after your break in scene where she is worrying about what happens at night Angel is referred to as male.

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Ah! Thank you for the info :rainbowlaugh: I was so caught up in that too, as to whether or not it was a male.

3236310
Darn, thanks for catching that. I can't believe I missed that during my proof-read. :facehoof: Heck, I wasn't even sure what gender Angel Bunny was in the show. :twilightblush:

*Sees story title* M'kay, another Twilight based story.
*Sees 'mature-sex' rating* Oooh, so it's a clopity story...!
*Sees cover art* i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/6697088768/h30C54079/

Too bad I'm not a clopper, I read anyway though.

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Yeah... I'm good at making people laugh.
I'ma jew, got a good sense of humor! Lolz

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I'm lovin' the story, //tries to think of creative nickname for you Deli! :pinkiehappy:

3306899
Ahaha thanks!! :raritystarry: Really glad to hear that!

read chapter one when it arrived and dropped it in my read later to see if the awesome would be maintained.
just read chapter two...... yep faved.
good on ya and keep it up.

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Ahaha thanks! Hope you continue to enjoy the story :twilightsmile:

To quote a classic "it's always the quiet ones..." xD Fluttersy you a silly pony :yay:

You should try your hardest to not switch tenses mid-sentence, which I noticed a lot. Keep it in past tense; it's the easiest to stay in.

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Thank you for the info! :heart: If you can, please point out the parts in which that occurred so I can fix it :twilightsmile:

Wow, when I saw that part about *spoiler* Shy and Twi together it made me think 'wow, another story rushed' and then it turns out she's daydreaming... Omg you had me worried xD

3512369
Ahaha yup. Don't worry, there will be plenty more :raritywink:

3512369
I'm actually releasing the next chapter out today, so yeah :rainbowlaugh:

3512398 looking forward to it, I'm loving the plot (hehe) so far

Correct me if im wrong, but was that a dream inside a dream?

3512843 Ack author please... Stahp @.@ I can't process this :pinkiecrazy:

Oh dear god so much inception.
Seriously though, loving this so far, really looking forward to more.

3513557 Can't believe I wasn't following you, I will correct this injustice :eeyup:

damnit damnit DAMNIT!!! i love this, but for luna's sake stop torturing poor flutters.
or dont cause you write her really cute confused.
im only thankful the students here cant see what im reading. the 36 year old tattooed janitor with the scarred up arms and face dawwing at pony fic. my rep would be dead. id still be damned happy im reading this though.

Umm....... What just happened? xD

BTW, still loving this! Please stop scaring me with the sudden dream love though lol

KNEW IT WAS A DREAM! :raritycry:

but... :rainbowlaugh: FLUTTERSHY! lol, torturing her with dreams of her getting twilight :pinkiesmile: lawls :pinkiehappy:

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Yes, Fluttershy does have to endure some torture, but who knows. Maybe it'll be worth it in the end...oh wait...I know :raritywink:

3 years ... since the last update

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