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Spitfire is sick and tired of colts playing her for money, or just being with her for her fame and bragging rights. She wants a stud who will love her and be faithful to her. Unfortunately for a Wonderbolt, that kind of relationship isn't very easy to come by.

There is one particular earth pony stallion she's had her eye on though. A mysterious large and pony from the north, who lives outside of Ponyville in a simple forge, making master crafts and selling them. When she finally decides to go and talk to him, she hopes to find the love she's wanted for so long...

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 14 )

not bad. i like that you messed around a bit with the events of the gala. Maybe add a little more detail, but that's just me. :eeyup:

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More detail, him? :) How so?

I adore even the smallest critique!

It's good, keep going

I vote for more, I'd like to see where this goes. It's rare to see a f/m spitfire pic.

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Thanks! :D It's very encouraging!

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I know, it's insanely rare to find something with Spitfire that isn't F/F. If we do find M/F she's always crossed with Soarin.

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Just in how she knows the forger pony, but that's probably to come in future installments.

Also, gotta agree with thewaffler, it's nice to see a straight spitfire fic once in a while.

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The thing is there is a lot that really hasn't been done before. That's why your fic works well, you have the element of surprise. I haven't seen a shipping for Trixie that's hetero, Gilda X any Stallion(one word: Hippogriff), Zecora x anyone.

I love odd shippings like MacPie.

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MacPie EXISTS!?!?!? UNPOSSIBLE! Seriously, that's the one pairing I haven't seen. Truth be told I've seen more AppleMac now that I think about it...

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On DA there's a couple of pics and one fic of Mac Pie.

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AppleMac is <3333333

I thought this was great! I would love to see more later on. Keep goin with it!

:raritydespair::raritycry::raritydespair::raritycry::raritywink: Nope, you're staying on my fav list, whether you like it or not:trollestia:

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